Writing Update

Hi Everybody!

So, I submitted my first draft early this morning and was not fully satisfied with it. There were alot of holes that need to get filled in and restructured from all of the constructive feedback that I received after my presentation on Tuesday. I have to admit, it is a bit tedious, having to go in and restructure writing from a slightly different view. But, after all of the work we’ve done throughout the semester, I know that it will only enhance my paper for the better. I guess, if you think about it, it shouldn’t be too complicated since the majority of the research is completed, its just about gluing the pieces.

Earlier today, I had the opportunity of meeting with another Baruch Professor who informed me of two Professors at Baruch with a lot of knowledge, research, and experience with the Young Lords. I really wish I would have known this earlier on, but still want to try to get in contact one of them this coming week to help me cultivate a coherent paper.

-RHD