I understand this is late and won’t receive credit, but I will post anyway.
Over the past week, I’ve really tried to fill the holes in my paper as evidenced by my lackluster presentation. I was confused about my own premise as well as the reasoning of my argument and made strides towards fixing those and I believe I did.
I made changes to each of my reasons, in order to get the most concise and coherent statements and added really great sources to back them up, which was a blaring problem in my presentation.
I made some really great changes and am excited about finishing up this paper. In my first draft, failed to mention criticisms and suggestions; I will be adding those, too.
