Rene’s Research Update

Hi everyone.

With the annotated bibliography assignment coming up, I’m doing a lot of reading (I’m sure all of you are as well). I’m finding a lot of good information regarding my topic in the scholarly articles I have acquired. But one fear I have is figuring out which information is the most relevant and useful for my topic, and which information is not. Most of the sources that I am reading have tons of good information but I want really want to pick out the information that will strongly support my argument. In order to achieve this, I list the important information that I find as I read the article. And when I finish reading the article, I go over the list and only keep the information that I believe will strongly support my argument. It’s actually a very good way to keep track of all the information I will be using in my paper because as I have mentioned before, it is easy to get information overload when reading so much. Also another fear I have is not knowing if I have enough information to write 20 pages. I don’t know if anyone else is feeling the same way, but it is something that has scared me since the beginning. Hopefully after completing the annotated bibliography assignment, I will know if I have enough information or not.

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Matthew, Research Update

Hi everyone,

I would like to say I hope everybody is  safe from the effects of the storm last week.

Onto my research, I have formulated my argument (but am still working on the wording),which is “preventative care measures established in the Affordable Care Act are the best way to take care of the populations’s health and health-related economic issues.”

As for the presentation, I am always looking for new sources and trying new techniques, key words, and term searches and have been pleased with what I have found. Like many of my peers, I’ve noticed that simply trying new keywords and following the keywords allows for really great resources. I’ve also been looking at the references that are listed in the sources that I’ve read.

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Argument & Presentation comments

Hey class I haven’t been able to post this past week because Hurricane Sandy knocked out my internet and lights for a few days.  So for this blog post I’m going to combine last weeks topic and this week topic together.This past week I have been doing a lot of reading and writing developing my argument moreHey class I haven’t been able to post this past week because Hurricane Sandy knocked out my internet and lights for a few days.  So for this blog post I’m going to combine last weeks topic and this week topic together.This past week I have been doing a lot of reading and writing developing my argument more more each day. I realized that I’m not going to specifically talk about financial incentives for people only donating kidneys but instead discuss why providing financial incentives to people donating organs in general is the best solution to solving the organ shortage in America. 

I’m excited to present my research however I need to start focusing on how I am going to organize this presentation, from gathering all the information from all the different sources and blending it so it meshes well together. I find that a lot of my sources have the same or similar information however different dates and the statistics so deciding which forces are more relevant will be a challenge. Figuring out how to combine all of the information together is what I’m trying to figure out right now. After completing the argument assignment I realize that I have many strong reasons backing up my original claim however I am still unsure of how it’s going to flesh out my entire paper. I think I’m going to start on a basic outline that is very detailed to give me an idea of what exactly I have to write about for the entire paper. So that’s where I’m at right now see you guys in class!

 -Maggie

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Carmen Cortez – Additional Resources to Support Main Argument

Dear Class Members,

I hope that everyone has fared okay during these difficult times and that you and your family are safe and well. With respect to the progression of my argument, I have been able to widen my database of available resources using specific key words, which has allowed me to find studies and articles that align more closely to my area of study. Whereas, I had started my search with the use of “community college” and “vocational/ career-based programs”, I have been able to extend the variety of resources by simply replacing “vocational programs” with “internships”, which specifies a critical component of vocational programs in community colleges. In turn a relatively minor change has resulted in significant progress, which has enabled me to further develop my argument. I have established my main argument in support of increasing financial funding toward the implementation and expansion of vocational programs with a focus on transfer that demonstrate an integration of vocational and academic programs in community colleges. Vocational programs were originally established as a bridge toward workforce development and known as terminal programs but over times, changes in structure and objective have resulted in successful programs that integrate the main objective of transfer programs and the coursework found in academic programs. I seek to established the importance of the effective allocation of funding toward vocational programs with a transfer focus that demonstrates increased levels of receptivity to the needs of a diverse student base and have shown to bolster social integration, expectations and ultimately transfer rates.

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Dana Howell research update

Hello all,

I hope everyone is doing well after this stressful week. The sources I reviewed this weekend seem to present similar arguments regarding the relationship between social policy expenditures  and regime type.  According to Tor Jacobsen, written in the study ” “Welfare Attitudes and Social Expenditure: Do Regimes Shape ?” Attitudes are often rooted in value structures and the value structures are influences by national contexts, like regime institutions.(Liberal, Conservative and Social-Democratic) Leftist attitudes are   synonymous with opinions that are pro collectivism,and favorable of state responsibility and equality of incomes. Rightist s attitudes on the other hand, are characterized  by a preference for individualistic values and income differences and a more negative stances toward government intervention.

See  you all tomorrow

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Celeste Simon- Research Update

Hey,

I hope everyone is faring well after the storm.  Unfortunately, I am still without power, but being at school today has restored some sense of normalcy!

When last I posted, I had figured out my argument.  Hooray!  Now, I am working on actually formulating the data to substantiate it.  I have an article from Peter Salins, “City, Suburbs, and the Urban Crisis.” It outlines the growing urban crisis, due to the exodus of wealth and business due to suburbs.  Salins argues that, because there is a tax incentive, as well as a social incentive, for people to move to suburbs, it increases the likelihood, leaving cities to do more with less.  Right now, I am trying to find more articles with data that outlines the economic impact of this move on cities, as well as sociological articles as to how the enforcement of Broken Windows changes residents’ perception of crime.

See you all tomorrow!

-Celeste

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Rahad Research

Hey guys its Rahad. I hope everyone is safe form sandy. Its crazy in NYC no gas and power, but were going to make it through.

I have been researching on Academic search complete and noticed many of my research is magazine articles. This whole time I was trying to play it safe by clicking on peer reviewed thinking I was getting the best articles, but that’s not the case. Many of these articles are one sides and opinion based. I decided to leave academic search complete for a bit and go back to my old friend Google. I typed in nation rifle association in Google and went to their website in which I was amazed.

I was so mad at myself for not looking at this before. This answered the question to my argument how NRA has influenced court cases in the past contains to gun control and gun owner ship. These guys are running muliti million dollar organization and I have to say they are one of the best activist groups in the country. The NRA has established The civil rights funds in which help support, court decision, legal legislation and any other court case containing to gun owner ship and gun control. This is an organization was creates by the NRA. They are handling numerous cases across the country. I am currently reviewing the NRA web site and is giving much deeper understanding of the organization and helping me answer questions on gun control and gun rights.

 

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Research Update- Presentations

Hello All,

I feel that the past few weeks (excluding the past week ) I have been pretty productive. I have a set argument, yet i’m still concerned about the way I’m wording it. I have the reasons and evidence however I still need to clean up the way I worded it a little bit. I started working on the annotated bibliography, which I must admit has been very helpful because of the individual analysis that goes into each one. It gives you a better understanding of the topic.

I know that presentations are coming up soon, and while I am not yet prepared to present, I have a good idea of what I want to say , now its just a matter of organizing my ideas appropriately.

I hope everyone is well after the recent weather catastrophe, if not I would like to offer help to anyone who may need it. Please let me know and I will do what I can to help.

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Salome part 8

Hi class,

who thought that a little hurricane could effect  a life so much even if your area wasn’t the epicenter.

Over the unofficial brake Ive been reading my sources and getting to know the topic more. i feel confident that i know enough about the topic and where i can pull my evidence from which make me feel better. What I’m confused about is starting to put these things together I am not ready for the presentation but hopefully my group is gonna encourage me on this. My unofficial argument is: US government put Americans at risk of lower quality public health when the bush administration rejected the Kyoto accord. Various scientific research provides proof for this argument.

 

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Argument Update

Hi Everyone,

I hope you and your families weren’t heavily affected by the hurricane!

So, I thought I was going on the right track but the comments that I’ve received from group members have helped to shape my research topic/argument a bit differently. I think I was going off towards a paper that I found interesting, but did not necessarily give answer to the “so what” question. I feel like group members were respectfully asking “so what” during our discussions and am grateful for that because it helped me look at my research in a completely different light.

Therefore, my argument has come to be:
The current involvement and success of the community-based organizations (CBOs) and public outlets in the New York City-Puerto Rican (Nuyorican) community are a direct result of the leadership of the Young Lords Party’s (YLP) New York Chapter at their peak. These CBOs and public outlets, that have spun out of the YLP, serve as the most significant venue by which Nuyoricans have been able to gain educational and socioeconomic mobility in NYC.

Compared to what I came up with in the past, I think that this argument encompasses the ideas and areas that I explored with the research to back it up in a more concise way. Thanks to everyone for the help! 🙂

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