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blog post 3.2

Similes:

As empty as shelves in a grocery store before hurricane.

As weak asĀ gossamer

Gathered together like a flock of sheep scared by a wolf

As rough as Hitlers hand

Trembling like colibris wings

Praying like mother whose son is at war

Bouncing like a check from an unreliable source

Smiling like a fourty-year-old who is finally getting married

 

Metaphors:

Heart of gold

Mountains of flowers

War is a dead end

The ocean is a mystery

The moon is Earths friend

This house of cold roommates

My love is a cherry in my cake of life

Writing is pouring your soul on the paper

 

My friends mother has always been as rough as Hitlers hand, still somewhere deep inside she had a heart of gold. My friends boyfriend brought her mountains of flowers, her mother did not know where they came from. He was her love, he was a cherry in her cake. Later her mom realized that war is a dead end, so she became friends with her cherry and they started a big family later.

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