Forgiveness for the 1st Draft…

What did I just read??? I felt like I was in the Twilight Zone the entire time. Forgiveness by Rebecca Brown is a really interesting short story and I’m glad I had the chance to read it. I must admit, it was a very painful to make a case study out of it. Creativity is not my forte. As a journalist, I’m more of a facts and information type person. All throughout high school in my English classes, we wrote persuasive and informative essays, never creatively. I like to say that high school killed our creativity.

I had a lot of trouble creating a thesis for my essay about Forgiveness. Even when I had an idea of where I wanted to go with the essay, I lost it from over thinking. I’m not excited about this essay but I’m content with it for now. I just wish I had a stronger thesis and point of view on the idea. I’m hoping after several edits I can perfect the paper and make it stronger. Who’s Gonna Save My Soul by Gnarls Barkley is a video that reminded me of Forgiveness by Rebecca Brown. It has a similar theme to the short story and I wanted to share it so check out the link  and let me know what you think. (Even if you didn’t read Forgiveness)

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