Though “Forgiveness” by Rebecca Brown was an attention catching short story that triggered a million thoughts in my head, conveying those thoughts on a piece of paper in a certain form of a case study was just as hard. As i mentioned in my cover letter, i tend to just ramble on with the various thoughts and ideas in my head that may make sense to me, but may lack sense and flow to another person; so this would definetely be something that would need extra attention and revision.

If i could think of something that i’m excited about in regards to this paper, i would come up with nothing. But if i could think harder, i would say that i am excited about how clear, thorough and not boring readers could possibly find my essay after all the revision and improvements to be made. This will also be my first essay assignment in college for me so i am also excited/anxious about my first essay grade(which fingers crossed hopefully won’t be soooo bad, since Ms. K mentioned earlier about her strict grading policies).