This first essay was very complex at least for me. Writing it became an issue because everytime I did I had to delete it and start over. It got annoying after a while. However, after I changed the topic I was going to write about it went about smoother. To be honest I have read my paper a few times and I know it is not perfect but I do not know how to revise it. It could use some tweaking but I’m scared that if I start tweaking I might mess it up or change the topic completely. I am struggling with coming into terms with my thesis. I don’t know if it’s strong or not. If it connects with my points.

I am excited to get this paper done, to see the “masterpiece” complete. I am excited to recieve positive criticism on how to make my paper better from those that know better. And I’m excted to see the grade; see if I wrote a good one or not. Hopefully people see my pooint of view through my points of arguments 🙂