Although I have not finished my research argumentative essay, my peers gave me valuable information I could translate into my writing. I usually have a hard time coming with more ideas, but my peers gave me many suggestions on how I could proceed with my topic. My argumentative research paper is about how fast food is unhealthy for society as a whole. One of the ideas my peers presented was about how celebrity icons have an effect on consumers and how their fame persuades people to buy this product. One recent example is the Travis Scott meal from McDonald’s. I added certain elements like this to my essay to further support my argument. One of my major problems with writing is having a good flow in my writing. Usually, my transitions from paragraph to paragraph are bad, so in this essay, I tried my best to adjust where certain topics should be placed. I don’t know if it’s just me but when I write I usually write what comes to mind and it tends to make paragraphs all out of order. Right now I want to focus more on adding details and information and then fix grammatical issues afterward.