The writer that helped me on my draft would be Cathy Park Hong’s writing. In her writing she uses craft moves like dialogues, characterization and rhetorical questions. That really spark a big idea of what I need to write on my draft. So, it really helps me out because I was confused at first. I used a lot of dialogues to spark a conversation so readers could feel that moment. I also used characterization so readers can almost see how the characters that are used in my draft looks like/act like. Their behavior and appearances.