Blog #2 Christian Alvelo

While writing my first draft I definitely kept reaching for Cathy park hongs “Bad English” because the amount of craft methods she used. Her strategies made me more engaged with the text and made me want to do the same. Even though I didn’t nearly incorporate as much as her in my draft I will continue to look at hers for reference so I can try and incorporate more craft moves and make my writing more interesting for readers. So far I have only incorporated dialogue but I want to try and include more imagery, setting and try and elaborate on the scenario that I am writing about. I also want to use my own voice so its not just me writing and people reading, but more me speaking to an audience.