I used Hong’s writing as a model in my first draft. I liked how she used sensory details, metaphors, and imagery through her story. She used a lot dialogue which I incorporated in my draft. Her voice also is present, it’s like as if the story is alive, especially with the use of humor she used. I mimicked this to make my story engaging. Everything from introduction, characters, setting, and conflict is clear so that is something I can make sure my narrative does too.
