East River State Park Brooklyn Flea Multi-media piece

3 Responses to East River State Park Brooklyn Flea Multi-media piece

1. AGabor says:

   May 13, 2013 at 10:50 pm

   Luisa–This is much improved. But in the opening shot, you need to tell us when the flea was moved and why–briefly. Also, what happened to the wonderful photo of the scarves waving in the breeze–isn’t wind still an issue? And doesn’t the wind raise concerns about this new location? Don’t you want to include the photo for that reason? I like some of the food-stall photos, but there are so many of them they imply that the flea is only a food market, which is not the case, right? Do you have the names of any of the business people who are connected to the individual stalls–for example the Peace Corp workers who started Madagascar chocolates. Photos of customers (with names) and perhaps comments about what they think of the products and the flea?
2. Luisa Thompson says:

   May 13, 2013 at 11:14 pm

   Professor,

   The changes that we make is what you will consider when looking at the final result of all our multi-media pieces?
3. Luisa Thompson says:

   May 13, 2013 at 11:21 pm

   I did not include the scarves because this time around there was not any clothing vendors or painting vendors, etc.

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