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I think one part that was really effective was how Jill Abramson actually inserted herself in the story. It’s rare for that to occur in an article but Abramson offers valuable insight as she has covered HRC for years; it also helps to know that HRC doesn’t like Abramson, so this article doesn’t strike as inherently biased.

The multiple perspectives throughout the story aid in the way the narrative is spun. We begin with her acceptance of the Democratic nomination this year; throughout the article, we see glimpses of her early years, her mistakes from 2008, other glaring blemishes along the way.

All in the all, these vantages in the angle: that HRC is on the Democratic ticket because, despite all the adversity that has come her way, she has tackled it head on, learning from her mistakes, and playing to her strengths.

https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2016/jul/23/hillary-clinton-profile-jill-abramson-us-election-2016

Profile Pitch

November 8, 2016 will be historic for a variety reasons. Until then, the time in between can leave one in a state of limbo. Uncertainty plagues the nation and we’re all caught in its vacuum. One way that it might suck involves Donald Trump’s proposal for mass deportation.

While this proposal might not threaten you, it will affect numerous New Yorkers all around you. You may not notice the difference in the daily bustle on the street, but maybe your fellow classmate you were getting to know suddenly isn’t there anymore.

This pitch will involve Angelina Lorenzo. Lorenzo is an undocumented student living in the Bronx; she is majoring in Public Affairs at Baruch College. I think Lorenzo is worthy of being profiled because she can provide a narrative about what her education means to her – she has briefly touched upon the subject here – and how such proposed policies will affect her and others around the nation — I feel the general narrative around the subject of deportation revolves around adults; I think this pitch can highlight how it equally affects students nationwide.

A Tale of Two CUNYs

Denny Jacob

JRN 3060

A Tale of Two CUNYs

When you look at the American flag, you see history. The colonies we once were, the states we now represent. A multitude of lines symbolically representing much of what America has to offer: hope, resilience, fortitude. Over the past few weeks, one line in particular has been pulled out: the fine line. The fine line that represents many subjects where we stand divided; conflicting ideologies that put us at odds with one another. Throughout history, many have pulled on this line. But whenever possible, we’ll avoid the discord and sew that fine line away for another time, tucking it behind the flag. But enough is enough – at least Colin Kaepernick thought so. He would use his platform as an athlete to spur a movement that has generated a lot of traction with no ending in sight.

On August 27th, 2016, Colin Kaepernick exercised the right to not stand for the national anthem because he would not “stand up to show pride in a flag for a country that oppresses black people and people of color.” This would soon spark cries of outrage on one side, while garnering respect and accolades on the other. The mixed reviews come from numerous athletes and service members – both past and present. As more spotlight on the matter has risen, we see athletes across all levels – from professional to collegiate to pee-wee football – expressing their view on the matter. But the coverage has shifted, and the dialogue no longer seems to represent both sides.

Cristina Andrade can and does represent both sides, however. The 23-year-old sophomore is going on four years as an active member of the Reserves Officers’ Training Corps; this will be second year with Baruch’s swim team, and first with Baruch’s cross country.

Andrade is never far from the flag. She is currently in season for cross country and attends ROTC training four times a week. On campus she can be found at pool where she is a lifeguard. As I met during her work hours, I couldn’t help but immediately notice the flag – erected high above all other banners.

Andrade emigrated here from Ecuador at age 11 and credits many of her values to her time here. She was heavily influenced by her mother and her cousin Freddy- a member of Ecuador’s army; both would play a role in her decision to enlist.

Upon discussion, it was clear how near and dear the flag is to Andrade. Like much of the public against the athletes who have taken a pledge against the anthem, she views it as disrespectful: disrespect to the flag, disrespect to everyone who has done a form of service. “At the end of the day, we’re fighting for you to have what you have …. Do you really wanna complain about it?” Andrade remarked.

As an emigrant, Andrade can barely contain her joy when reflecting all the opportunities she’s received. She stresses that millennials need to understand the meaning of them being here.

[The rest TK – waiting on responses from a few students from Hunter (ergo the presumptuous title)]

Feature Pitch

Denny Jacob

JRN 3060

Black Lives Matter was born in 2013 on Facebook in a response to the death of Trayvon Martin. Three simple words spurred thousands across the nation to revive an ideal that should have never been forgotten. On August 27th, 2016, Colin Kaepernick exercised the right to not stand for the national anthem because he would not “stand up to show pride in a flag for a country that oppresses black people and people of color.” Reactions to Colin’s stance have spanned from contempt to total support. We live in a country where our athletes have a platform to be heard; are we always keen on what they say, however? I’ll turn to the student athletes of Baruch and ask them – in light of Colin’s actions – will they still stand for the flag?

The issue is important because we are in a tumultuous time as the election gets underway. Millennials will play a huge role in the years to come as we shape America; we also voiced our concern for gun-policies and injustices to people of color in the most recent occurrences. We know how athletes and media organizations are reacting to Colin’s moves, but little of student athletes: do they agree with how he is using his platform? Should the flag be outside the scope of scrutiny when involved in an athletic sport? Which transcends which: the sport or the issues?

I should be the one to tell it because as an employee of the Baruch A.R.C. facility, I constantly pass and interact with the athletes, whether they are on or off season; especially as a season is underway. I also have direct access to coaches and staff through first-hand experience and supervisors who are in direct contact with higher ranking officials in the Athletic Department.

Source: http://www.espn.com/nfl/story/_/id/17401815/colin-kaepernick-san-francisco-49ers-sits-national-anthem-prior-preseason-game