This poem was a bit more challenging to decipher so I did a little research on the Italian intro. The first 6 lines written in Italian is translated as, “If I thought that my reply would be to someone who would ever return to earth, this flame would remain without further movement; but as no one has ever returned alive from this gulf, if what I hear is true, I can answer you with no fear of infamy.” It came from Dante’s Inferno which is about a person who goes to hell, but escapes hell and comes back to earth. The quote is said by one of the characters named Guido da Montefeltro, and when Dante asks to hear his story, he reply’s with the quote.
The first half and a little onward talks about a lot of things that can give you the setting of the poem and the character of Prufrock but it is written to deceive you. The poem begins with, “Let us go then, you and I,” hinting that this may be a romantic relationship especially since the title includes, “Love song.” Instead he says, lets walk down through half deserted streets with one night cheap hotels and sawdust restaurants which aren’t romantic. The last two lines of the first stanza is extremely important to this poem, “To lead you to an overwhelming question.” The point of this poem is to answer the question but Prufrock spends the majority of the poem avoiding the question.
Through the poem, as he avoids the question Prufrock character emerges. Prufrock is shy and lives life very ordinary. He does not go out and mingle and talk to others but hides behind walls and listens to their conversations. Throughout the whole poem he contemplates wither he should do something or not but as always, he does not. On the third page, each stanza ends with a question, “So how should I presume?”, “And how should I begin.” He keeps us reading by explaining what he has done. He speaks of eating, having coffee and walking but is that all he has done? If we look at some of words he uses we can assume that he may be in London, since the streets are foggy and he is drinking tea.
On the fourth page I believe he brings up the question. He brings up the question in beginning of the stanza, “And would it have been worth it, after all.” and ends the stanza by completing the sentence, “Would it have been worth it, after all, if one, settling a pillow by her head, should say: ‘That is not what I meant at all. That is not it, at all.” Prufrock obviously thinks that it would not have been worth it. He does not agree with taking risk. Prufrock is imagining his worst-case scenario here, he has asked her his big question which we don’t know and she replies that she has been misunderstood. It is like when people are afraid to ask someone out because they don’t want to be rejected. By the end, we realize that the whole poem was about a question he could not ask this girl because he was afraid. We know that there is a girl because there are references to her body in the poem, when he talks about the arms that are braceleted and white and bare, and the perfume dress.
This poem was very confusing because he goes back and forth with past and present tense. He also says he knows a lot about something such as,”And I have known them already, known them all:” yet he does not know how to presume. Oddly enough I think that was the point of the poem. To seem as if he has no direction. He just does average things and does not associate with any one. Guido from Dante’s inferno is referenced in the quote as a flame. He is called a flame because he does not own a body in hell for all the sins he has committed. I think that Prufrock is suppose to exemplify Guido because they both are in a world in which they cannot do anything. They must just stay and go on doing the everyday norm. As a flame in hell, all you can do is move slightly, there’s no way out. In the same way, Prufrock is stuck always contemplating his actions but never takes action.
Racheal Ali