Hello world!

Posted on April 24, 2012 by Mary Iannone

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2 Responses to Hello world!

  2. naiyong.hong says:
    May 9, 2012 at 4:08 pm

    Lovely description of your childhood experiences of sting, i was trying to figure it out from your very first sentence, maybe i am an awful reader, i figured it out only in my 3rd try,

    But vivid description though, and i don’t know you should change anything, everything seems come together very beautifully, though if you do want to give readers a more obvious hint of what they are reading about, since readers like me want any excuse to avoid reading, i think title might be a good place

    A beautiful paper nonetheless

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