Remix Draft

Michal Jacobs
ENG 2150, Dr. Blankenship
May 16, 2016
Project 3: Remix

Dear Dr. Blankenship and Writer’s Group,
The title for my project is “A Traditional Life.” In order to convey my family’s long-standing religious, Jewish traditions, I chose to present a shadow box as my project remix for this assignment. A shadow box affords the opportunity to create a concrete keepsake for my family. The primary audience I am considering in presenting the Project 2 paper are my ancestors. I take pride in the multi-generational commitment to Jewish tradition that pervades my family’s culture and identity. I know that my ancestors would be proud of their descendants’ maintenance of these traditions. Creating a physical keepsake in the form of a shadow box is a means of making a permanent dedication to my family’s story of immigration to the United States. This shadow box demonstrates how my family built new lives in America founded on deep-seeded Jewish customs and commitments, while simultaneously synthesizing American culture into their lives. In addition, this shadow box can be passed down within my family and serve as a reminder of important family values and heirlooms. Finally, creating a shadow box is a creative and interesting way of proving my rhetorical argument.
My thesis is “The root of my Jewish identity is neither accidental nor self-procured. I am the product of carefully calculated actions taken by my ancestors to ensure Jewish progenies and the continuity of a family with strong Jewish culture. My identity as an American Jew is the result of familial and multi-generational creation of, participation in, and devotion to a microcosmic Jewish society amidst, and sometimes in spite of, the American melting pot that has surrounded us since the turn of the 20th century.” I support my thesis by providing a historical background in my family’s involvement with different religious practices and communal organizations, which explains how through the generations my family has maintained close religious and cultural ties to the Jewish community in America. Affiliation and participation in these micro cultural groups provided a means of “sticking together” in a strange land, a near recreation of a Jewish ‘shtetl,’ a small Jewish town or village, in early 20th century New York City.
The shadow box I created contains trinkets and symbols of my Jewish traditions. It is organized in chronological order and includes important dates, life events and heirlooms that represent my family’s arrival and development in this country.
The hardest part of this project was gathering the materials I felt were important to use in the shadow box. Specifically, which items would best support my argument.

A Traditional Life

My traditional American life began in 1903, when my great-great-great grandparents immigrated from Eastern Europe with their children to escape virulent anti-Semitism, specifically associated with the infamous Kishinev pogrom. Upon their arrival at the shores of New York they faced challenges of a strange culture. They spoke Yiddish as a first-language and needed sponsorship to be allowed to leave Ellis-Island, where they had docked from Europe. One unique challenge they encountered was finding work that would not contradict with the religious Sabbath on Saturdays. New York City was home to Jewish religious institutions, synagogues, and schools needed to raise their families and join a community (Top left picture of shadowbox), and therefore, they opted to remain there.
My ancestors sought out other Jewish families and lived in mini Jewish enclaves in Brooklyn, an attempt at recreating the shtetl they had left in Russia. Although they had persecution and fear of death in Eastern Europe, life in the Brooklyn ‘shtetl’ was also not easy. Conditions were not optimal, and they were often the targets of anti-Semitic offenses.
Over time, many Jewish community members, including my ancestors, worked to to overcome poverty through a strong emphasis on education as well as keen business acumen in industries such as garments and banking. Many were able to raise themselves to higher-socioeconomic levels that included such occupations as doctors, lawyers, educators and businesspeople.
My great great grandparents were both active in their communities and in fact knew each other in Bensonhurst, Brooklyn because they were members of the same synagogue (Top right picture of shadow box and second row left picture). They instilled in their children, their love for Judaism and political affirmation for the state of Israel, which was established in 1948. The picture in the center of the shadow box is a family photo of my great grandparents, Nick and Sadie Mirwis, with my grandmother, Elaine Mirwis Jacobs, and her siblings, Alan and Arthur Mirwis, on the day of Israel’s establishment in May 1948. My grandmother Elaine’s family represented the typical American-Jewish family that participated in all American activities, which is clearly scene in my Great Uncle Alan’s boy scout uniform he is wearing in that same picture. My great uncle wearing his boy scout outfit on the same day of Israel’s establishment is an indication that although my family are European immigrants, they still adapted to their new surroundings and became fully immersed in American culture, while keeping their traditional Jewish observances.
The couple in the middle on the far right, are my grandparents who are alive and well today. They were married under a Jewish canopy, called a ‘chuppah’ in November 1958, in Brooklyn, New York. A ‘chupah’ represents a Jewish home, which the newly married couple are supposed to create for themselves and be blessed to raise a family that will do the same. My grandfather’s favorite line at every family wedding is “Peru U’revu Umalu et Ha’aretz” meaning “Be fruitful, multiply, and fill the land.” My family took that blessing to heart. Each of my grandparent’s four children, have six of their own children, and those 24 grandchildren, have gone on to birth 12 great grandchildren with many more to come. It is noteworthy to mention, that half of the grandchildren, and one great grandchild to date, are living in Israel. The bottom center picture is at my sister’s wedding in 2012. Not only does her wedding picture show her too standing under the same canopy, to that of my grandparent’s in 1958, but she has only gone on to achieve my grandfather’s favorite wedding statement to bear many children, where in the past 4 years since her wedding, she has had 3 children so far. This bottom picture best symbolizes my family’s balance as American Jews.
Surrounding each picture on my shadow box I added in some other symbols that always have represented my family’s Jewish identity. Some of these include: a Siddur, known as the Jewish prayer book, which we use three times daily, a washing cup, which is used before eating any bread or in synagogue to purify ourselves, the Torah, the bible, and a “Dreidel”, which symbolizes the miracle of Hanukkah.
The Jewish population in American today is growing and successful, due to people such as my grandparents who have helped it become this way by donating, and running many Jewish institutions. Both of my paternal and maternal great grandparents were Presidents of their synagogues, and took on great leadership roles, which is where my family learned to follow in their footsteps and better the communities in which we surround ourselves. Our genes are strong in the sense that we are have a desire to better our family, communities, and the Jewish people, and it is because of those that have taught us in these unselfish ways.

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Michal Jacobs

ENG 2150, Dr. Blankenship

March 17, 2016

Paper 1: Rhetorical Analysis of a Cultural Artifact

 

 

Dear Dr. Blankenship and Writer’s Group,

The Shawshank Redemption is a powerful and iconic movie that incorporated many life-lessons to its audience. This movie, set in the 1990’s depicts the protagonist, Andy Dufrense’s life being shattered when he is put in prison for the murder of his wife and her lover. Andy had a life full of wealth and accomplishment with a nice house and a beautiful wife, but lost it all when it was taken away in an instant when being thrown into Shawshank prison. Rather than letting these hardships get to him, in which he would lose his pride of the success he has achieved. He uses his brilliance to escape from prison, and rather than living the life of a broken puzzle piece, he fixes himself and actually ends up being a stronger and more successful individual than he originally was. Because of Andy’s willingness to overcome these personal struggles and hardships, I titled this paper The Next Step to Freedom: The Shawshank Redemption.

           Andy’s strength proved to the audience, that they too can overcome any barriers and obstacles and live the “American Dream” that each man desires. Not only did Andy find his freedom, yet again, but so did Brooks and Red in different ways. Freedom to each character in the film represented something different and came to each at different times as well. My thesis is “Whether adversity is deserved or not, it is how a person deals with these unique challenges, which will determine if they will achieve the freedoms they yearn for. However, not only are peoples’ challenges impeding freedom unique to them, but so are their very interpretations of what freedom means itself. One film that truly exemplifies the varying interpretations of freedom and explores the exigence that freedom has to each individual is The Shawshank Redemption, directed by Frank Darabont.” This thesis is dramatically changed from what I had in the first draft. The rough draft I submitted focused more on the themes of hope and redemption and the different times and situations I saw those themes and ideas play out. Not only was that draft a little more disorganized because it kept going back and forth in the film with these concepts, but it was also much more of a literary analysis, as opposed to a rhetorical analysis.

In this edited version of my paper, I decided to rather take a look at what freedom was to each character and when they saw that freedom and redemption take place. This was able to prove how a prison specifically takes away freedom and is a metaphor symbolic for the loss of one’s personal choice, while being held captive. I want to know if a reader of this paper is able to understand the differences of how each character accepted their freedom? Is this paper more of a rhetorical analysis now that is has an argument and a message not only to its readers, but also to its viewers in 1990’s America? I added another source called The Metaphors We Live By to explain what a metaphor is and how it explains the deeper meanings in this film. Because I had to revise this paper in its entirely for the final draft, but was hesitant in destroying the rough draft completely, I had a difficult time knowing what information was able to be kept and what parts of my draft were completely irrelevant to my edited paper and thesis.

 

 

 

 

The Next Step to Freedom: The Shawshank Redemption

 

Throughout history, humanity has shown strong desires for freedom, while struggling to overcome adversity. Life is full of many unexpected challenges. Whether adversity is deserved or not, it is how a person deals with these unique challenges, which will determine if they will achieve the freedoms they yearn for. However, not only are peoples’ challenges impeding freedom unique to them, but so are their very interpretations of what freedom means itself. One film that truly exemplifies the varying interpretations of freedom and explores the exigence that freedom has to each individual is The Shawshank Redemption, directed by Frank Darabont.

The Shawshank Redemption is a tale of hope in the midst of despair telling the story of Andy Dufrense (Tim Robbins), a successful banker condemned with a life-sentence in Shawshank Prison for the assumed murder of his wife and her lover. Upon Andy’s arrival at the prison, he meets Red (Morgan Freeman), a fellow convict and supplier of all goods coming into the prison. The two men connect and become best friends, despite their different backgrounds. Because of his connection to Red, Andy is rescued from a beating from the convict gangs and is later under protection from the guards when the warden begins using him in his money laundering operation. Andy’s dream of living by the beach in a Mexican coastal town is resolved when he escapes through the sewers under the prison and is on his way while seeking ultimate justice by revealing the crimes of his captors.

A prison is a generalized symbol of an individual’s loss of personal freedoms. Due to a person’s illegal actions and bad choices, their consequence is to be incarcerated, stripping them of their freedom and dignities until they are rehabilitated. The setting of the prison has significant meaning throughout this film, in terms of the audience. This structure envisioned, is symbolic because it represents the logos and mind state of a prisoner enduring a life sentence. This impenetrable fortress is representative of the realism of Andy’s tragic loss of freedom. In the beginning of the film, Red, the narrator, first points out this description of Andy in the prison. “The first night is the toughest no doubt about it. They march you in naked as the day you were born, skin burning and half blind when they put you in that cell… and those bars slam home… that is when you know it is for real. Nothing left, but all that time in the world to think about it.” In the film, the audience sees the closing of the steel doors before lights during the parole board scenes and whenever the inmates gaze out of their own cell, the symbol of prison represents loss of freedom and hope.

The main battle for freedom revolves around the film’s main protagonist Andy Dufrense. Andy’s ability to overcome the major obstacles placed before him is his need to escape Shawshank and obtain freedom. Andy’s mantra “Get busy living or get busy dying” is indicative of a man with a positive attitude whose perseverance will affect everyone he attaches himself to. To Andy, freedom is knowing that he is in fact still a strong willed man, and has even become stronger through his ordeal. He is aware that he will never have the same life he had before, but refuses to give up because accepting the circumstances and remaining in Shawshank would prove his weakness to himself. This sense of self-doubt would be an even larger loss of personal freedom than even the prison walls themselves. This is why Andy only truly feels free upon his arrival in Mexico. He knows he has accomplished the impossible and spending his remaining days in paradise is validation of all his efforts and planning over the past twenty years. This is why he, and he alone, was able to escape Shawshank despite overwhelming odds.

Andy had come to the prison a successful banker with a nice house, wife, etc. His whole future was changed because of an unjust decision. His first night in prison, the other convicts actually place bets to see if he would make it through the night. The sheer strength of his character brings about the pathos to which the audience will ride along in this journey to his freedom, not just from the Shawshank prison and its injustice, but from the overshadowing of tyranny and hopelessness that prisons foster and promote.

This significance of hope, and determination amidst the constraints of society are relatable to the reading by James Baldwin “My Dungeon Shook-Letter to My Nephew on the One Hundredth Anniversary of the Emancipation.” Surely, racism was imprisonment for all Black Americans at its peak and the residual effects remained long lasting. However, hope and inspiration can rise above despair and it is important to focus on future generations and how one person’s perspective can bring about change.

Freedom from prison and isolation is what drives the inhabitants of Shawshank more than anything else. However, for some characters in this movie, freedom can be interpreted in a different way. For example, the character of Brooks Hatlen (James Whitmore), who was an institutionalized prisoner for forty-years in the Shawshank prison is finally paroled, cannot adjust to normal life. Unlike Andy and Red, Brooks does not feel that leaving Shawshank will grant him freedom. On the contrary, it does not seem as if there is freedom in Brooks’ future because he has a unique personal definition of freedom. Brooks has been emotionally sidelined by his incarceration and too much time has passed for him to start life again.

In the article Metaphors We Live By by Lakoff and Johnson, it is stated, “The essence of a metaphor is understanding and experiencing one kind of thing in terms of another.” The Shawshank Prison is cast in the shadows of much darkness and this is why the first part of the movie was first slated to be produced in black and white, instead of color, to sensitize the audience’s perception. Here we see that freedom can be interpreted by each person and its’ meaning acted on differently. Appropriately, the metaphor of prison is descriptive in terms of imprisoning the souls of its inhabitants, particularly in the case of Brooks, whose soul is imprisoned and will not allow him to try to adapt to a civilian lifestyle. For forty-two years, Brooks functioned as a productive member of the prison community. He was in charge of the library and that represented a normalcy in his life while serving his time in prison. Another metaphor, which heavily analyzes Brooks’ feelings, is his pet pigeon, Jake. Brooks releases Jake before he leaves prison on parole. This represents Brooke’s letting go of the idea of freedom he has created for himself over the last forty-two years. He symbolically looks for Jake in the park, but neither finds the bird or hope outside the prison.

Brooks’ freedom is also not attainable because he has personally defined freedom as a life in which he does not have to make any decisions. He has committed himself to living a mundane lifestyle. Upon his release into society, he is disheartened to learn that the simple world he left no longer exists; and to adjust, he must be willing to learn how to solve new problems. It is the realization that his personal freedom of a carefree and simple lifestyle has been taken away from him that causes him to end his own life.

Similarly, Red’s problem lies in his institutionalized way of thinking as well. “Hope is a dangerous thing, he tells Andy.” He supports the prison system and believes it has helped him and is the first to tell everyone what he thinks they want to hear. Once he begins to oppose the system through his parole board hearings, he begins to stands up for himself and takes on a new point of view. It is at that point; he can leave Shawshank Prison a new man.

Red’s personal freedom comes with his decision to meet Andy on the island. He has let the prison system control his life for so many years that his decision-making process is dysfunctional. He is completely exposed to society’s judgment of him and must find the inner strength and courage to push forward to create a new beginning. His friendship with Andy is the stepping-stone, which guides him and gives him hope. Red’s “freedom” is his decision to be self-supportive. In the prison he was able to be the “go to man” and that was the extent of the control he had in life. Upon his release from Shawshank, he now can control his destiny, the right to make decisions while accepting the responsibility of his choices.

The spirit of The Shawshank Redemption is everlasting because the audience can relate to the protagonist and his journey to overcome the obstacles set before him. This iconic film resonates with the American public because it explores the human experience and challenges our ideals of freedom and justice for all. The Shawshank Redemption is indeed a redemption for all those who believe in second chances and each person no matter the hardships can find their personal island if they are determined to find it. In watching this film we can all be inspired to gather the courage to find happiness and “The American dream”, just like Andy does.

 

Works Cited:

 

  1. Baldwin, James. The Fire Next Time. New York: The Dial Press, 1963. Print.
  2. Lakoff, George, and Mark Johnson. Metaphors We Live By. Chicago and London: The University of Chicago Press, 1980. Print.
  3. Saito, Garrick. Why was The Shawshank Redemptionso powerful? 19 July. 2013. Web. 16 Mar. 2016.

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Rhetorical Analysis Paper-The Shawshank Redemption

Michal Jacobs

ENG 2150, Dr. Blankenship

March 8, 2016

Paper 1: Rhetorical Analysis of a Cultural Artifact

 

Dear Dr. Blankenship and Writer’s Group:

 

What I’m analyzing: The Shawshank Redemption

 

Title for my Paper: Coming Out of the Darkness: The Shawshank Redemption

 

Why I chose this Topic: I chose this movie because I felt this was an inspirational and powerful movie that incorporated many life lessons that I could relate to. This movie had a great plot with a wonderful cast that portrayed real life situations. There are many conflicting scenes throughout this movie and I felt the movie solved all of the conflicts and I felt satisfied with the ending.

 

My process in writing this draft: I felt there were many different ways that I could have analyzed this paper, so it was difficult in selecting the specific aspects I wanted to focus on, however once I chose the topics, there were many themes I found to be interconnected.

 

My thesis is: The Shawshank Redemption is a powerful, emotional movie created by its strong protagonist and its inspirational message, in which the subject matter of overcoming obstacles and redeeming oneself can appeal to all audiences.

 

How I support my thesis and organize my draft: My thesis was supported with the examples of situations in which the main characters coped with certain situations and how they changed and grew emotionally through their experiences.

 

Who is the audience in my mind as I’m writing: My audience is mainstream America of all different age groups and racial groups because this movie can appeal to all.

 

The biggest challenges have been: The biggest challenges were pinpointing the specific areas that needed further analysis to them.

 

Here’s what I think is going well: I think my supporting details to my thesis are very accurate.

 

Here’s what I think needs more work: I think I could work on more character analysis.

 

Here are questions I have for you as you read:

 

  1. Did I give a good analysis of this film in terms of the characters and plot?
  2. Did I prove my thesis with the supporting examples?
  3. Did I have a good introduction and conclusion that related to the body and purpose of this paper?
  4. Did I take into account all terms of the rhetorical analysis?

 

 

 

Life is full of many unexpected challenges. Whether adversity is deserved or not, it is how a person deals with these challenges, which will define them as a strong individual. The Shawshank Redemption is a brilliant film that delves into the souls of two men, as they take on the hardships of prison life, while keeping hope eternal. These characters represent two different perspectives into the mind state of a prisoner with a life sentence. Interestingly, the story is told from the perspective of the senior prisoner and how a newcomer’s determination would affect the lives of everyone he would attach himself to. Both points of view seem to balance each other out, which can be found in this friendship. The Shawshank Redemption is a powerful, emotional movie created by its strong protagonist and its inspirational message, in which the subject matter of overcoming obstacles and redeeming oneself can appeal to all audiences.

The Shawshank Redemption is a tale of hope in the midst of despair telling the story of Andy Dufrense (Tim Robbins), a successful banker condemned with a life-sentence in Shawshank Prison for the assumed murder of his wife and her lover. Upon Andy’s arrival at the prison, he meets Red (Morgan Freeman), a fellow convict and supplier of all goods coming into the prison. The two men connect and become best friends, despite their different backgrounds. Because of his connection to Red, Andy is rescued from a beating from the convict gangs and is later under protection from the guards when the warden begins using him in his money laundering operation. Andy’s dream of living by the beach in a Mexican coastal town is resolved when he escapes through the sewers under the prison and is on his way while seeking ultimate justice by revealing the crimes of his captors.

This all-time favorite movie, The Shawshank Redemption was based on the novel, by acclaimed author, Stephen King. It was originally titled, “Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption”. Rita Hayworth was an actress in the 1940’s, the time of the setting of this novel. She is symbolic because her poster hangs in the cell covering the hole through the tunnel, in which Andy Dufrense would escape, a plan twenty years in the making. The setting of the prison has significant meaning throughout this film, in terms of the audience. This impenetrable fortress is representative of the realism of Andy’s tragic situation. In the beginning of the film, Red, the narrator, first points out this description of Andy in the prison. “The first night is the toughest no doubt about it. They march you in naked as the day you were born, skin burning and half blind when they put you in that cell… and those bars slam home… that is when you know it is for real. Nothing left, but all that time in the world to think about it.” In the film, the audience sees the closing of the steel doors before lights during the parole board scenes and whenever the inmates gaze out of their own cell, the symbol of prison represents loss of freedom and hope. However, there is a central message with the showing of the poster of Rita Hayworth, in which hope can rise from the darkness. These constraints are a testament to the strength of the human spirit. The director of this film, Frank Darabont, was probably debating on whether to be using black and white scenes for parts of this film, instead of color to bring out the bleak nature of this film, however it might have had a negative affect on the audience’s perception. This technique could have possibly enhanced the human experience of actually being part of the storyline. The title of this film, The Shawshank Redemption, can be summed up with a very famous quote from the movie, “Get busy living, or get busy dying.” The redemption for these two men comes about differently, but inevitably comes together at the end. Andy has shown what can be accomplished when a plan of action is put into place, struggling through years of hardship, but persevering towards his goal, which never waivers. Red considers his bleak life when he becomes a parolee and a grocery clerk, but remembers Andy’s plea to join him in Mexico if he is even released. Red’s ultimate decision “to get busy living” is an additional message of the story that a person can change and improve and have a second chance at life. The theme of redemption in this movie is really for the audience to determine. This ambiguity enhances the movie’s ability to leave us wondering about Andy’s innocence or guilt for much of the film. This mystery adds to the power of his innocence and fuels the determination of his character in his final escape. The sheer strength of his character brings about the pathos to which the audience will ride along in this journey to his freedom, not just from the Shawshank prison and its injustice, but also from the overshadowing of tyranny and hopelessness that prisons foster and promote.

Hope and redemption more than anything else is what drives the inhabitants of Shawshank and gives them the will to live. However, for some characters in this movie, hope can be an abstract passive emotion and redemption comes in a different way. For example, the character of Brooks Hatlen (James Whitmore), who was an institutionalized prisoner for forty-years in the Shawshank prison is finally paroled, but cannot adjust to normal life and therefore takes his own life. It does not seem as if there is redemption in Brook’s future because he does not allow his life to continue in order to feel as a whole man again. He is still broken by his incarceration and too much time has passed for him to start again. Brook’s releases Jake, his pet pigeon before he leaves prison on parole. This represents Brooke’s letting go of any hope he has of surviving life on the outside. He symbolically looks for Jake in the park, but neither finds the bird or hope outside the prison. His redemption is also not attainable because Brooks has not been able to acquire the ability to solve problems. He has never had to make a decision or contemplate a plan. Problem solving requires a problem. Similarly, Red’s problem lies in his institutionalized way of thinking as well. “Hope is a dangerous thing, he tells Andy.” He supports the prison system and believes it has helped him and is the first to tell everyone what he thinks they want to hear. Once he begins to oppose the system through his parole board hearings, he begins to stands up for himself and takes on a new point of view. It is at that point; he can leave Shawshank Prison a new man.

From Red and everyone in the prison’s point of view, the problem of Shawshank is the over abundance of support. However from Andy’s point of view, the problem is the opposite- stifling control. An example of Andy’s inner strength is when he continually petitions the state for new books to stock the prison library. He receives rejection after rejection from the state, but continues to send letters week after week and is ultimately successful. Andy’s courage allows him to believe in himself and carry himself to his dream.

Much of the religious fervor in this movie contains empty, spiritual rhetoric. This is clearly verbalized by the character Samuel Norton (Bob Gunton) who is the corrupt and heartless warden of Shawshank state prison. Norton’s attempt at redemption is merely a façade to maintain his good public image. He portrays himself as a strict Christian, who says he believes in two things: discipline and the Bible. After learning of Andy’s accounting skills, he employs him for his own illegal uses of laundering money and transferring it into various accounts. Later on, when Andy confronts the warden with knowing the real murderer of his wife and her lover, who is willing to testify on his behalf, Norton blackmails him with threats of destroying the library and being placed in solitary confinement. His religious verbose might appeal to the logos of a devout society, in which he creates “A holier than thou attitude towards the prisoners.” It is viewed as a psychological manipulation to already depressed and subservient inmates. Upon discovering that Andy has escaped through the tunnel, the warden realizes that he has been duped by Andy and is now completely exposed to society’s judgment and will be incarcerated in his own prison and decides to take his own life. Andy has found redemption, yet again.

Andy’s ability to overcome these major obstacles is astounding to Red and the other prisoners. He has come to the prison a successful banker with a nice house, wife, etc. His whole future is changed because of an unjust decision. His first night in prison, the other convicts actually place bets to see if he makes it through the night. Andy’s determination provides strength that allows him to save himself and Red and the other prisoners as well. This theme of hope, and determination amidst the constraints of society are relatable to the reading by James Baldwin “My Dungeon Shook-Letter to My Nephew on the One Hundredth Anniversary of the Emancipation.” Surely, racism was imprisonment for all Black Americans at its peak and the residual effects remained long lasting. However, hope and inspiration can rise above despair and it is important to focus on future generations and how one person’s perspective can bring about change.

The important message of “The Shawshank Redemption” will have a lasting impression on its viewer long after the final scene of the movie. This is attributed to the many   memorable scenes that make film so iconic. The reason this movie resonates with the audience is because there is an undeniable connection through the various themes, which explore the human experience. These include dealing with an unjust predicament, solving problems, persistence and perseverance and helping others within the framework of friendship. These are common life-lessons, which anyone can relate to. Shawshank Redemption reminds us that despite the hardships and challenges life brings before us, each person can find their own personal island of redemption should they be determined to find one.

 

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Digital Literary Narrative

Digital Literacy Narrative
ENG 2150/Sp 2016: Week 1

Take a moment and reflect on your own history and experience as a writer/composer in digital contexts:

  • Compose your responses in Word on this document, or copy and paste these questions to your blog as a post, but either way, I’d like for this to be your first blog post on your course blog. To make searching your blog easier, please create a new page on your blog entitled “Digital Literacy Narrative.”

First, describe your presence in this class. Did you know you were signing up for a hybrid writing class?

I did not know I was signing up for a hybrid class or know what it was, until I was informed by another friend in the class.

What do you expect from a hybrid class?

I expect for this class to be more online submitted work and self-explanatory assignments.

Have you taken one before?

I have never been in a hybrid class before, but look forward to it.

What questions do you have as we begin?

I just want to know what ways you would suggest to organize ourselves and stay up to date with all of our assignments in the class when we don’t meet that often for reminders.

What does “good participation” in a class mean to you in a hybrid context?

I would consider good participation to not only be when we meet in class, but also to be respectful online if we were to be answering someone’s comments and keep our opinions appropriate.

Next, tell me about you as a writer and a reader. What types/genres of writing do you enjoy?

I like contemporary writings because I find them easier to understand and I am able to connect with them better.

What forms of digital writing do you encounter in your everyday life and for what purposes?

I read many articles online and surf the web often just to be widely knowledgeable in many fields and areas.

What programs and/or technologies enable these forms of composing? Try to think widely here (email, social media, texting, word processing apps such as Google Docs, Microsoft Word, etc.).

I pretty much use every form of social media, some for my purpose to connect to others, but some only to connect with other people, while still concealing myself.
What is your prior experience with composing using multiple forms of media? I am used to many social medias.

What is your method for reading analysis?

Do you take notes?

Yes, mostly by hand as it allows me to concentrate better.

Do you read online, on your phone, etc?

I read many articles online, but most of which wouldn’t be considered as scholarly. However I do try to need the newspaper almost every morning. If I am reading a certain requirement for school, I would much rather read from a printed out hand copy of the text.

Do you prefer to have a tangible text?

Yes, it helps me focus.
Finally, what is your earliest memory of writing?

My earliest moment of writing was in kindergarten. Every morning we would have to write 1 sentence in our notebook, describing any moment that stood out to us from the previous day.

How has “writing” changed for you since that memory?

My writing has obviously progressed tremendously from that moment, but in small intervals.

What are your strengths as a writer and/or composer of digital/online texts?

I think my writing strength is my ability to have an abstract view and opinion regarding a certain topic, that may be an out of the box, but rather interesting approach to something.

Recall a past experience when you felt proud of your writing and digital composing: Who was the audience? Where did this piece of work circulate? What are your current views about writing?

A proud writing moment of mine was when I had to write a research paper in a class last semester, that took us the whole4 months. After completing the paper, we had to give a presentation to the class and informatively talked to them about our topic, which made me feel like I mastered a new skill and was very knowledgeable in a certain field.