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Essay 2 Draft
Dear Reader,
In my Essay 2 Draft, I focused on the organization of paragraphs and sections to create unity.
I also focused on the development, characteristics, and attributes of a character.
I also chose to develop Essay 1 in a new direction.
A concern would be possibly that perhaps I did not create unity; I was planning to write thoughts concerning possible causes for specific actions; but did decide that, that was another topic; perhaps essay.
Also possibly there exists an inappropriate change of tense.
In any case, I do hope the following essay maintains the reader’s interest.
Essay 2 Draft
In every newspaper, every magazine, every printed piece, Clinton could read “Admits to Affair”.
It was the topic of conversation at work, places of employment; jobs everywhere.
A transgression around since the beginning of time, it may not have been exemplary, it is true, but was it not a personal affair? Only those closest to him had a right to anger and/or upset.
And what about the issues? Issues of government, the economy, ie: the nation? The improvement of issues he was voted into office for? Whether or not proposals for various reforms were being followed through with?
Proposals and reforms for universal healthcare and coverage; proposals of domestic programs for education, worker training and child care subsidies. Reforms for gun control, as well as a ban on assault weapons. Proposals to cut the deficit, and allow for the correct balance between deficit spending and investments, in such domestic programs.
And what about issues of foreign policy? Actions in Somalia, Bosnia, and Haiti? or NAFTA, the North American Free Trade Agreement, finally concluded and signed in 1994? or the Kremlin Accords, an agreement signed and concluded with Russian president, Boris Yeltsin, to disallow nuclear arms towards one another’s country?
Was there any concern by the media over whether these reforms were under development towards the economy’s; ie: the nation’s, future prosperity?
Well… it remained to be seen….
But nothing was over yet… and so he would continue working on the issues… for the reasons he was voted into office for…. improving the economy and therefore nation.
At the end of his term, he established The Clinton Foundation, working and acting towards improving the world.
Hope does spring eternal.
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