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Thesis Statement

In “The Epic of Gilgamesh” love, death and sexuality are the three things Gilgamesh must embrace before becoming a good king with an everlasting legacy.

2 thoughts on “Thesis Statement”

  1. Hey. I feel that you just need to put why he must embrace them, e.g. his lack of these qualities, without getting too specific. Overall, I think it is good that you stated the 3 parts of your essay in one sentence.

  2. I’m not convinced about the embracing sexuality issue. I think he does that quite enthusiastically early on, and that’s part of the problem. Rethink how sexuality fits in with your thesis, and revise. Although, I’m not 100% sure that you need sexuality in your thesis, even if it does fit into the essay.

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