As I went through my sentence analysis I noticed that in the start of my essay I would have a lot of simple sentences and as you read later in the essay it’s mostly compound and complex compound sentences. I also noticed that some of my sentences can be combined while others can be cut. I would say my writing style starts off simple because it’s just the introduction but it becomes complex at the end. I will fix my excessive and choppy sentences. These changes will enhance my writing because it will allow readers to know my main idea clearly and it will allow them to think critically.
Spring 2022
