Blog 10

In order to understand my paper i asked my friend and fellow peer that also takes this class just with a different professor. When I told expressed my summary aloud and he was taking notes the process took 15 minutes. When he was taking notes he realized that I was very into the topic. But it was also some topics that I didn’t even mention in the essay. For example I spoke about personal experiences as a black man in American society , However, I had nothing relating to that in my essay. That was my first analyzing of his  notes. The next and final major thing that I noticed was that in his notes he said that my form of speaking and writing felt completely different. I should incorporates my own voice alot more