Monthly Archives: March 2012

“Better late than never, but never late is better”

Posted on March 29, 2012 by everard.best

First and foremost I would like to beseech Professor Kaufman to forgive for being two days late with this blog post. It has been a hectic week for me and this blog post completely slipped my mind. Well I’m done … Continue reading →

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Revision Paper 2

Posted on March 28, 2012 by jenny.budman

Writing this paper has been more difficult then I thought. My first draft was defiantly off topic and had no focus points. After reviewing the handout on close reads I have a better understanding of what needs to be done. … Continue reading →

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Paper #2 Revision- Progress Report

Posted on March 27, 2012 by nina.nadvornaya

Editing this paper shows to be a bit of a struggle. Like Bianca mentioned, its difficult to me to write essays that are too open-ended. As much as I love creativity and the ability to basically create my own ideas; … Continue reading →

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Revision Process

Posted on March 27, 2012 by sa114343

My revision for my essay is going well. I am in the stage of writing where I  am working on adding analysis and quotes in my essay. I am really happy that Professor Kaufman gave us a chance to give … Continue reading →

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Paper 2 Revision

Posted on March 27, 2012 by natalie.lombardozzi

So far, the revision to this paper seems easier than our first paper assignment. It may be the topic that makes it seem easier, since it is more deep and serious. In the first paper I’m writing about dessert, while … Continue reading →

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Revision

Posted on March 27, 2012 by William Pierre

In many cases my rough draft is exactly what it sounds like. A “Rough Draft”. I am often unsure about how exact I should structure my essay so I usually just try to meet the requirements that are set, and … Continue reading →

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Rough Draft of Paper # 2 – Reflective Writing Log

Posted on March 27, 2012 by bianca.work

For now I believe that my revision process is going much more smoothly than it did in my first paper. Upon reflecting on my first paper I realized that if  my thesis is not something I support then it will … Continue reading →

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Posted on March 26, 2012 by yeseul.park

My first draft was just the bone structure of the body/paper. I just wanted to get my ideas down and how I will possibly carry out the paper. With this said, my draft was empty. It didn’t have much details … Continue reading →

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Revision

Posted on March 26, 2012 by joshua.levin

My revision is going well but it is quite challenging. I have added many quotes and tried to look at things in a different way; imagining I am a reader seeing it for the first time. What would I add … Continue reading →

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Reflective Writing Log: Paper #2 Revision

Posted on March 26, 2012 by marina.elias

Close reading does not seem to me so hard from the beginning, but after I started working on my second paper it appeared to be very difficult. The most challenging part for me is to analyze. By its definition, analyzing … Continue reading →

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