Revision Update

So far, I am still struggling with the second revision.  Strengthening my thesis statement is one of the things that I am still struggling with.  Explaining and analyzing the evidence is another thing that I am struggling with.  However, I am satisfied with the amount of quotes I have so far.  If I find more ways to prove my thesis statement, I will add more quotes.

My classmates underlined many of the summarization in my first draft.   I am going to fix the things that I am missing as well like the analysis.  Turning the summarization into analysis is still a problem for me.  I am planning to e-mail Professor Kaufman my thesis statement to make sure if my thesis statement is strong enough.

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