My first draft was just the bone structure of the body/paper. I just wanted to get my ideas down and how I will possibly carry out the paper. With this said, my draft was empty. It didn’t have much details as well as close analysis. But as I’m reading “The Cafeteria” once, twice and the third time, I’m beginning to sense where I want to go with this paper. I didn’t have a specific thesis at first but I’m seeing a clearer path. Especially after seeing my grade for the first paper, I noticed I have to be even more specific about my thesis.

After reading the story several times over, I can see where more examples and analysis can be drawn from in accordance with my thesis. I began with around 3 different possible arguments, but I chose the one with the most parts to it. The coloring that two of my classmates did helped a lot. They helped me pin point my possible thesis and also helped me realize the parts I was summarizing. At this point, I’m just taking notes on the side for the analysis and possibly relating back to my life if that’s allowed.