My revision is going well but it is quite challenging. I have added many quotes and tried to look at things in a different way; imagining I am a reader seeing it for the first time. What would I add to make it read better? How would a magazine or other professional article read? I really am looking for ways to add information in the form of quotes and deep analysis to make my thoughts and ideas come to a professional college level fruition.
The challenge for me is to sit and find the right information to draw out. That’s the ‘close reading’ part and that analysis can be difficult for me. I tend to do better with black and white instructions. I mean, overall I prefer a total open-ended assignment; the creativity to do a free-write. But if there are guidelines; having to come up with my own analysis is challenging. I’m confident I will pull all this together and draw on my past mistakes in the 1st assignment to create a well written and organized paper that makes me proud of the effort I put in.