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Paper #2 Revision
The revision are going well, I am still having trouble developing my thesis though. I wanted to write about my Bartleby because humanity can its definitiveness has always been a mystery to me. I know the religious interpretation depicts the … Continue reading
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Revisions
Revising my draft for this paper has been difficult because my first draft had a vague thesis. I’m trying to improve on that by making a more specific and stronger thesis. My first draft has some summary, so I edited … Continue reading
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Revision Update
So far, I am still struggling with the second revision. Strengthening my thesis statement is one of the things that I am still struggling with. Explaining and analyzing the evidence is another thing that I am struggling with. However, I … Continue reading
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Revision Plans
Next, I plan on working on my thesis. I feel like I’ve only grasped the idea of my thesis; it isn’t fully there yet. I hope I can find a clear idea of it through more group work. Once I … Continue reading
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Revision for Paper 2
My first draft was lacking in all areas, but that sort of gives me an idea of what and where I can improve. I want to narrow down on a more specific topic. I know I want to write about … Continue reading
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My Revision Process
So far I can say that my revising process is going somewhat smoothly. I think my main problem right now is making my thesis clear and specific to a point where the reader knows exactly what’s going on in the … Continue reading
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Reflective Writing Log
Currently, my revising process is going smoothly. I am reviewing all the notes from the peer revision as well as the professor’s notes and comparing it to my own notes. I am still struggling to develop a clearer thesis. I … Continue reading
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Greetings from Poland
Hi all, I’ve arrived in Warsaw, and just finished my first day of work here–I miss you all! I’ve been thinking a lot about the theme of our class and our work together–it is interesting to think about our conversations … Continue reading
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Writing Groups for Paper #2
Here are your “writing groups” for Paper 2– 1: Everard, Javid, Ana 2: Jenny, Ravi, Fahima, Bianca 3: Rey, Lawrence, Natalie 4: Annie, Justin, Sadaf 5: Marina, Erick, Josh 6: Mikey G., Esther, Philip 7: Simon, Nina, Julia 8: Siroor, … Continue reading
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oops. I totally forgot about the blog. I remembered that the prof saying something about free response blog.. but I forgot. Sorry! My girls came down to New York for their Spring break, which kept me busy all weekend. It … Continue reading
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