Monthly Archives: May 2012

I’m still working on the thesis part of the paper. I’m trying to be as specific and related to the rest of my paper. And as for the body, I’m adding more actual quotes from the main poem itself. And … Continue reading →

My essay is going well and I have edited some things and added a lot of information to clarify my paper. I think it’s a pretty good job all around about a subject that is important. The digital essay is … Continue reading →

The 1 on 1 meeting was helpful. I thought I already had a good thesis, but now i realize I need an even more specific one that answers the question “So what?” Two words I’ve grown to hate xD. I … Continue reading →

I think I’m doing pretty good actually. That conference I had with Professor Kaufman actually really helped. She helped me find a bunch more sources and now I can add a bunch more stuff to my essay. Right now I’d … Continue reading →

So far my paper has made huge strides; it went from being uncollected thoughts jumbled up on a peice of paper to a more structured way of writing. Thanks to the one-on-one with Ms. Kaufman I do know where to … Continue reading →

So I was having a lot of trouble with this paper and I was extremely worried but the meeting with Professor Kaufman really helped. With the suggestions, I feel like I’m making progress with the essay. I feel like I … Continue reading →

After the individual conference with Professor Kaufman, my thesis seemed more clear. I was told to take the thesis one step further. I think I know where my essay is heading. Although my thesis isn’t complete, I have a better … Continue reading →