Next, I plan on working on my thesis. I feel like I’ve only grasped the idea of my thesis; it isn’t fully there yet. I hope I can find a clear idea of it through more group work. Once I get that done, I’ll be able to elaborate on it and perhaps let all of my ideas loose (because I didn’t include all of my ideas in this essay). I also have to get rid of all the summaries I made. My peers showed me all the times I summarized the reading and I was surprised.
Instead of changing things to my essay, I’m going to add to it. I realized that I left my essay “open-ended.” In essence, my essay has some holes that need patching up. This goes hand in hand with my quotes. I plan on switching some quotes and analyzing those quotes even more. I plan on adding 2 – 3 paragraphs of this.