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Revision Paper 2

Writing this paper has been more difficult then I thought. My first draft was defiantly off topic and had no focus points. After reviewing the handout on close reads I have a better understanding of what needs to be done. … Continue reading

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Paper #2 Revision- Progress Report

Editing this paper shows to be a bit of a struggle. Like Bianca mentioned, its difficult to me to write essays that are too open-ended. As much as I love creativity and the ability to basically create my own ideas; … Continue reading

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Paper 2 Revision

So far, the revision to this paper seems easier than our first paper assignment. It may be the topic that makes it seem easier, since it is more deep and serious. In the first paper I’m writing about dessert, while … Continue reading

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My first draft was just the bone structure of the body/paper. I just wanted to get my ideas down and how I will possibly carry out the paper. With this said, my draft was empty. It didn’t have much details … Continue reading

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Paper #2 Revision

The revision are going well, I am still having trouble developing my thesis though.  I wanted to write about my Bartleby because humanity can its definitiveness has always been a mystery to me. I know the religious interpretation depicts the … Continue reading

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Revision Plans

Next, I plan on working on my thesis. I feel like I’ve only grasped the idea of my thesis; it isn’t fully there yet. I hope I can find a clear idea of it through more group work. Once I … Continue reading

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Revision for Paper 2

My first draft was lacking in all areas, but that sort of gives me an idea of what and where I can improve. I want to narrow down on a more specific topic. I know I want to write about … Continue reading

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My Revision Process

So far I can say that my revising process is going somewhat smoothly. I think my main problem right now is making my thesis clear and specific to a point where the reader knows exactly what’s going on in the … Continue reading

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Reflective Writing Log

Currently, my revising process is going smoothly. I am reviewing all the notes from the peer revision as well as the professor’s notes and comparing it to my own notes. I am still struggling to develop a clearer thesis. I … Continue reading

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Greetings from Poland

Hi all, I’ve arrived in Warsaw, and just finished my first day of work here–I miss you all! I’ve been thinking a lot about the theme of our class and our work together–it is interesting to think about our conversations … Continue reading

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