finally i finished the singing poster. I have it with 3 different colors.. i like them all… so i decide to poster them all here… which one do you like more? and i am trying to put on my midterm pics to… but i usb is broken i lost all my midterm pictures. however, i might scan them and upload them later with my second and third pics. still editing the rest pictures.
Huge improvement from earlier version. This is really good! I like the top one the best, because her skirt looks the most like it could fly up ala
Marilyn. And the colors seem the best balanced. Well done!
Interesting, very flirty. The skirt and hair are particularly well-executed. Can you provide a bit more shading on her right leg to give it some volume? It looks too flat. The star in the background looks jaggy/pixelated – is that intentional?
The type treatment on ‘Super Girl’ is nice, very bling-y yet wholesome, too. You might try making the one word in a smaller type size than the other, depending on whether you want to emphasize the ‘Super’ or the ‘Girl’ more. It would create a bit more dynamism I think.
The layout of the text inside the circle is not nearly as resolved as it could be, pay attention to your white space, type size, line breaks, etc. Pay attention to your use of language, too – if you’re trying to make it look ‘real’ then you need to have the text carefully proofread and appropriate use of punctuation etc. That is, if you’re using type, you’re responsible for using it well so that it does justice to your image, not distract from your image…
The star in the background is intertially made pixelated to create the distance feeling, and to make the girl in the focus.
And thank you Professor for the comment for the commetns, I will fix the words and the leg.
And i have headach of doing the texts inside the circle. I know it looks awkard there, but just don’t know how to fix it…