An ambitious project on a subject that often doesn’t command enough interest, or respect! That said, I think this might have been more effective if you had considered a narrower window of time… as it is, there are huge chronological leaps, and I question some of your dating at the end (although this may be a by-product of the Timeline app’s limitations). Nonetheless, there is a lot of rich and substantive historic detail here.
An ambitious project on a subject that often doesn’t command enough interest, or respect! That said, I think this might have been more effective if you had considered a narrower window of time… as it is, there are huge chronological leaps, and I question some of your dating at the end (although this may be a by-product of the Timeline app’s limitations). Nonetheless, there is a lot of rich and substantive historic detail here.
Grade: A