We worked pretty well organizing our information.  We did our body paragraphs separately .  However to put our paragraphs together we added transitions and did it together.  This way the speech flowed better from topic to topic.  To make it even better we could have added better transitions.  We didn’t have to use visual aid because the kind of art we used was sound.  We had a lot of audio clips so the audience can witness it first hand instead of hearing us talk about it for 20 minutes.  We could have had less text on the slides so when we  spoke it would come out more naturally.  This presentation was very different than the ones we did before.  Mostly because we had to rely greatly on outside information.  We had to memorize facts and details that weren’t our own which is hard because if you forget there is really no way to get that information during the speech.  My goal for this speech was mostly to not look at the screen when talking and to memorize my facts successfully.  During my speech however I feel like I could have spoken louder and more naturally to the audience.  For me to have been interested in the speech the speaker cant have been monotone.  Sometimes the information was repetitive which was annoying to sit through.  Over all I enjoyed doing the presentation.