Your problem memo makes a very strong case for why there needs to be involuntary commitment reform. You clearly present the detriments a patient faces when they are admitted to mental health treatment centers against their will.
I think that presenting the scope of the problem will help strengthen this problem memo. Perhaps you can present the number of patients in the state of Maryland who are involuntarily committed. This will help readers realize the severity of the problem and feel that there is a urgent need to solve this issue.
Hi Emma,
Your problem memo makes a very strong case for why there needs to be involuntary commitment reform. You clearly present the detriments a patient faces when they are admitted to mental health treatment centers against their will.
I think that presenting the scope of the problem will help strengthen this problem memo. Perhaps you can present the number of patients in the state of Maryland who are involuntarily committed. This will help readers realize the severity of the problem and feel that there is a urgent need to solve this issue.