In this memo, I could not feel the gravity and the seriousness if the issue. The writer started with a very long definition of Human Trafficking and then jumps to how to take care of the victims and not the issue itself. The issue had been defined and not explained. The harms have been cited briefly. We don’t really understand from this memo the costs and risks associated with human trafficking; yes we can understand the causes cited which are due to financial issues. as well undocumented immigrants. However, this paper is missing evidences to support her noble cause to defend such an issue as well discuss maybe the primary incentives for people to even participate in this horrible illegal act. I would like more from the writer to explain how does human trafficking works by giving and supporting her work with real world examples.
Thank you
nice memo
In this memo, I could not feel the gravity and the seriousness if the issue. The writer started with a very long definition of Human Trafficking and then jumps to how to take care of the victims and not the issue itself. The issue had been defined and not explained. The harms have been cited briefly. We don’t really understand from this memo the costs and risks associated with human trafficking; yes we can understand the causes cited which are due to financial issues. as well undocumented immigrants. However, this paper is missing evidences to support her noble cause to defend such an issue as well discuss maybe the primary incentives for people to even participate in this horrible illegal act. I would like more from the writer to explain how does human trafficking works by giving and supporting her work with real world examples.
Thank you