The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock is solemn in its use of diction. Prufrock talks about the night sky, deserted streets, fog and smoke, which highlight the negative connotation of the poem. With this analysis, Prufrock as a character is overwhelmed by the environment around him. The poem is a monologue, potentially inside Prufrock’s mind as he voices out inner conflicts and leads the readers along with him. At the beginning, he compares the evening sky to a “patient etherized upon a table”. My understanding of Prufrock is that he is entirely listless and unable to advance, thus requiring something to numb his mind and carry on his mundane lifestyle. He frequents the red-light district, goes to cheap hotels, goes through ominous half-deserted streets, drinks liquor, and eats oyster shells, which are actually aphrodisiacs. The women that Prufrock sees talks of Michelangelo – my understanding is that the women are ostentatious, which is a characteristic that drives Prufrock to behave in order to fit in. No matter how much he tries to impress by putting on expensive clothing, he is criticized by others’ opinion (or so he believes). In a sense, Prufrock is also superficial and materialistic (he cares a lot for his clothing and how others view him). His imperfections make him lonely, discontented, and vulnerable, and his high expectations stray him away from being satisfied in physical relationships. Prufrock serves as the epitome of frustration pent up inside the human mind, even inside a modern, complex environment with endless entertainment. Prufrock is a relatable, yet very unlikeable character because he does not opt for change, even though he dreads his current self.
“There will be time, there will be time
To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet;
There will be time to murder and create,
And time for all the works and days of hands
That lift and drop a question on your plate;
Time for you and time for me,
And time yet for a hundred indecisions,
And for a hundred visions and revisions,
Before the taking of a toast and tea.” (lines 26-34)
My interpretation of this section is that Prufrock is concealing his true personality and faking his disposition for social gatherings. He repeats “there will be time” to distract himself from doing the things that he desires. He insists that he can revise what he hasn’t done, because there is plenty of time to do it in the future. Because of this, his existence is meaningless. This pointlessness is reinforced by the footnote which alludes to the work of the Greek poet Hesiod – it states that it is a contrast to the productive labor emphasized in Works and Days. Prufrock, on the other hand, is entirely stagnant. I believe Prufrock wants some sort of change, but is unwilling to take the risks.
Questions:
The phrases ‘you and I’ and ‘you and me’ are often repeated in the poem. To whom is Prufrock addressing to by ‘you’?
Towards the end of the poem, Prufrock talks of mermaids singing to each other. He includes “I do not think that they will sing to me” (line 125). Why? What does this mean?
Why is this titled a ‘Love Song’ when Prufrock clearly does not have a proper grasp on love?