Free indirect discourse

In the morning, Ying Lin was wakened by the busy noise from the kitchen. Her mother was preparing breakfast. Sweet potato congee, fried eggs and sausages smelled good.  However, Ying did not have time to eat breakfast, because she had to rush to take a bus. She left her apartment, and took elevator from seven floor to first floor. She went directly to Kissena Boulevard and Holly Avenue bus station, then she got in to 27 bus.  She got off bus at Flushing Main Street. It was raining. Some people were waiting for bus in the rain; some were running to subway station; some were standing under shop’s corridors to take shelter from rain. Life was busy and tough, but every individual was striving for life, dreams, and families. Ying stopped thinking and run to subway station. The rain wetted her hair and clothes. Luckily, she got on 7 express train. The train passed Willets Point Station, 74St-Broadway, Queensboro Plaza, Court Square Station, Hunters Point Av, and Jackson Av, and Ying got off at 42 St Grand Central. Beautiful and touching music echoed through the station. Ying stopped to enjoy the music. William was playing Canon by violin. His wife was sick, and he needed financial support. William looked at Ying and think whether Ying liked the music, and he doubted whether this music had any melody for all these passengers. Ying donated one dollar and transferred to 6 train. 6 train passed 33 Street, 28 Street, and Ying got off at 23 Street.  Finally, Ying passed two traffic light and run into Lawrence & Eris Field Building.