Monthly Archives: November 2015

“The Women’s Swimming Pool” by Hanan Al- Shaykh

Hanan Al-Shaykh portrays the everyday struggles women face in Islamic-Arab countries. In her short story The Women’s Swimming Pool, she vividly describes the grueling anxiety the young narrator faces as she accomplishes the goal of visiting the sea. The story is told from a young girls point of view, as she and her grandmother make the journey to Beirut to visit what she has been dreaming for: the sea. The story implies the clash of strict religious views and secular views, and the obstacles faced for young girls stuck between both worlds.

Throughout the story, it becomes evident that the sole purpose of the grandmother to the young orphaned narrator, is only to demolish her dreams, instill fear,  brainwash her and force her down a road that is obviously not the right one for this young, hopeful girl. The young narrator seems to always be drowning in sweat, anxiety, fear and sadness. Her grandmother is the one to blame for all this because of the constant negativity she inflicts on the girl. This is demonstrated in the sentence “All this trouble is that devil Sumayya’s fault” (1168). The grandmother repeats this over and over again, blaming the young girls friend for putting “modern” and “inappropriate” things in her head. She sees this visit to the women’s swimming pool as something extremely inappropriate, due to her strict religious mentality. From all the fear and angst the grandmother inflicts on her, the young girl starts doubting her dream. As they arrive to cosmopolitan Beirut, the young girl only strengthens her doubt of having come, because they do not fit in at all in the city. “If any man were to see you, you’d be done for, and so would your mother and father and your grandfather, the religious scholar- and id be done for more than anyone because its I who agreed to this and helped you” (1168). With these words the grandmother is not only crushing the young girls dreams, but also brainwashing her with this absurd idea that her going to the swimming pool like other young girls her age, will block her relatives from entering heaven from the improper, and “scandalous” act she’s committing. These type of ideas are the last things the grandmother should be telling the young girl as they are making their way to their destination, the destination the girl yearns for and dreams about back home on those dreadful tobacco fields.

The grandmother represents the grim side of the story, in other words, the strict religious lifestyle. The lifestyle that only refrains the young girl of all the happiness, and carelessness she should be experiencing like other young girls of Beirut. Cosmopolitan Beirut represents the bright and promising side. The side that would never put such ridiculous fears in young girls heads. The side that would encourage you to follow your dreams, even if they’re as small as visiting the sea. Toward the end of the story, it becomes clear to the young girl that the grandmother is only keeping her back in life. “I felt how far removed we were from these passers-by, from this street, this city, this sea. I approached her, and she again put her weight on my hand” (1171). As the call for prayer was heard, the grandmother knelt down on her knees and prayed. People were staring at her, as nobody did this anymore in this modern city. The young girl felt sorry for her. As they finally arrived to the swimming pool, the grandmother ends up blocking her (with her prayer)  and essentially her dream. At that moment, she knew which side she was going to chose and how she was going to live her life.

Nawal El Saadawi’s “In Camera”

Nawal El Saadawi’s In Camera illustrates the treatment of women under the judiciary system of an un-named government. She presents the trial of Leila Al-Fargani, a young woman arrested for her negative opinion of the President: “Imagine, ladies and gentlemen. This student, who is not yet twenty years old, refers to Him, whom God protect to lead this noble nation all his life, as ‘stupid’” (1109). Awaiting her hearing, she is imprisoned for several days, beaten, raped by prison guards, and is unknowingly presented to a courtroom. The text is introduced through the perspective of Leila, who is blind sighted either from having been inhumanely beaten or by blindfold; through her minimal view she struggles to apprehend her surroundings. Subtle clues and flash backs help both Leila and the reader understand the events leading to her current state. Upon her hearing, as the Judge speaks for Leila’s crime, many in the audience begin to applaud in support of her claim towards the President.

To be “born a female in a world that wants only males” is the central idea El Saadawi challenges in the text. In this society (presumably an Arabic or Islamic state) women are always placed at a disadvantage. As Leila’s Mother had explained to her “What’s politics got to do with you? You’re not a man. Girls your age think only about marriage…Politics is a dirty game which only ineffectual men play” (1109). Leila had stepped in forbidden territory and was to be punished for this “corruption” she had conveyed. To the men in this society, women are the “weaker” sex and are to be controlled. Women are not to express any notion or opinion to the system of oppression which they live in. Yet, Leila continued to stand true for her belief.  She is the black sheep in the herd; the one which stands from the rest and is followed by the others. El Saadawi’s work of activism encourages women to speak their voice, for they are never alone in this fight of equality. It is a topic that should not remain “in camera” or a “closed session” for that matter.

“In Camera” by Nawal El-Saddawi

Nawal El-Saddawi criticized social system in the Arab culture and their history of discrimination against women in her fictional story “In Camera”. Nawal El-Saadawi used a third person view to write this fictional story, also she use an outsider perspective to looked at the problems women were facing in the 1900s, She mainly focused on government oppression, limitations of women and how women were treated unequally in traditional Arab society.

In the story “In Camera” by Nawal El-Saadawi, women often played an insignificant role in traditional Arab society and were treated unequally in the political world because of their biological sex. The quotation, “No animal could sit like the way she could, if it did, what would it do with its four legs?” (1108), highlights just one of the struggles that women are faced with—degradation. Nawal El-Saddawi shows the status of women in her culture by using irony to compare women to animals, perhaps even worse than animal in some cases. In addition, she illustrated the idea that women were not supposed to get involved in the corrupt judicial system, “If she had been a man, he would not be suffering now the way she was” (1113). Leila, the main character of the story was raped by 10 different men and was badly tortured just because she made a political remark about a government official by calling him “stupid.” Even Leila’s parent were brainwashed by the beliefs of their traditional Islamic culture and believed that, “Politics is a dirty game which only ineffectual men play” (1109) women like Leila should not be part of it.

The conversation between the rapist and Leila brought out one of the most important themes of the story. One of her rapists said, “This is the way we torture you women—by depriving you of the most valuable thing you possess” (1113), followed by Leila’s angry response, “You fool! The most valuable thing I possess is not between my legs, you’re all stupid. And the most stupid among you is the one who leads you” (1113). The dialogues between Leila and the rapist showed that the role of women in the Arab culture were insignificant and often undervalued. Women’s ability to contribute in politics has been overseen in the past; morally deformed Men only looked at women as sex objects, in order to violate their “honour and dignity” (1113). The only punishment they possessed was to use sexual violence against them. Yes, they might have physically destroyed Leila’s body, but they will never conquer Leila’s heart and her desire to break the voices masked by fear of the women within the Arab culture.

Twenty One Love Poems

Adrienne Rich’s Twenty-One Love Poems depicts the ebb and flow of a relationship on the surface. Her lines seem to describe the hardships of a relationship surrounded by the city. However, when framed with the fact that these poems were written for her lesbian lover, each of her statements become more than just a description of a passionate relationship; they are a social commentary on the hardships of a relationship not considered the “norm” in her society. Rich’s poems draw a story of a relationship in its entirety, and within that story, her choice of words, phrasing, and metaphors clearly demonstrate how difficult her relationship had been for her.

Rich opens with a poem that contains the line “No one has imagined us” (236). With this line, she is openly claiming that their relationship (which exists in a city of “pornography, science-fiction vampires” [236]), is something that hasn’t been thought of. In a society which chooses to actively imagine vampires and other fiction, the thought of two women together is still considered absurd. Without the framing of who the poems was written for, this line could easily be misinterpreted to only mean no one could see the two lovers together due to their personalities, or other circumstances. In Poem II, Rich states: “I laugh and fall dreaming again/of the desire to show you to everyone I love,/to move openly together/in the pull of gravity, which is not simple” (237). In this instance, her choice of the words “desire” and “openly” clearly demonstrate her need to freely act as she wants. However we see that society, which she compares to gravity, has made it difficult. It is also interesting to note that with this interpretation, accepted societal norms is taken as fact, as gravity is–like it can not be changed. The fact from Poem I, that two women together is a crazier notion than science-fiction vampires or televising pornography is, like gravity, pulling them down. However, again it could have easily been a weaker statement had it not been framed with an idea of who the poem was written for. In Poem XIX, Rich addresses their struggle straightforwardly saying “two women together is a work/nothing in civilization has made simple” (245). This is the clearest example of Rich’s commentary on how her relationship’s battle against society is not simple.

Diving into the Wreck

Diving into the Wreck by Adrienne Rich is a piece rich with symbolism. It is helpful to know about Rich’s background as a feminist and voice for women writers in order to interpret this piece. A shipwreck is a common symbol for things or ideas that have faded away, or in this case, have been hidden but not forgotten. Women have not always had the opportunity to express themselves through literature. This poem can be interpreted as exploring the process of searching for the work of female writers that history has quieted but not forgotten completely.

The narrator of this poem represents anyone who desires to search for the work of women of the past. Rich writes, “I am she: I am he” to show that discovering the actual work of these women can be done by anybody. It is important to note that the narrator seeks the work of these women and the work alone. Rich makes it a point to say, “the thing I came for: the wreck and not the story of the wreck” in order to show that the narrator wants to see and read the work without the bias and distraction of the views of others. The narrator is inspired by what he/she has read about the topic of women’s literature but seeks to develop his/her own opinion on the matter as shown through the first two lines of the poem, “First having read the book of myths, and loaded the camera.” In order to see the work of these women in their full authenticity, the narrator must be prepared to protect his/herself from being influenced by any other opinions and also cut away what is deemed as unnecessary. This is skillfully illustrated by the armor and knife that are taken down to see the wreck. As one seeks the truth, it is easy to be sidetracked. Rich likens this to the difficulty of breathing the further one goes down into the depths. What is important is that a seeker of the wreck takes the first step to explore and stays focused along the way. Rich shows that as long as one starts down the ladder and remembers the purpose for doing so, it is always possible to discover and explore for oneself the wreck that has sunken but has not been forgotten.

Two Sisters By Ama Ata Aidoo

Two sisters, two perspectives. Mercy and Connie. Two Sisters written by Ama Ata Aidoo in 1940s Africa questions is it right to use manipulation for the sole reason of benefiting yourself? Powerful and successful men use their wealth to essentially receive what they want from women? Is this bringing down the generation of women as a whole? Connie the older sister and motherlike figure to Mercy certainly thinks so yet her husband opening admits jumping from mistresses even though he is not classified under “Big Men” in Africa. James, Connies husband asks, “Why shouldn’t she?”.Connie struggles against these morals even when she herself receives a gift from Mensar-Arthur. Mercy is on the other-hand in in a purist of happiness and Connie does not want her to be used. Moving from man to man after Mensar-Arthur is imprisoned? But are Mercy’s intentions true for her pursuit of happiness or is she just after material possessions. Waiting for a man to give her a house, car, money while she doesn’t invest in herself for an education or job. “Women allow men to behave the way they do instead of seizing some freedom themselves.” “Girls” are keeping all other women down. Women’s insecurities gives men the power. Both Connie and Mercy are at fault here. Connie for turning her cheek and asserting her own marriage and Mercy for her acquired taste of the unearned finer things. Who is more to blame?

Chinua Achebe “Chike’s School Days”

In “Chike’s school days”, Chinua Achebe effectively shows contrast between two different cultures. He tries to show attitudes from both sides. He starts with the culture that white men brought from the neighbor’s view who was not converted to Christianity at the time. When the neighbor offered food to Chike, he said they don’t eat heathen food and rejected, she murmured under her breath “even an Osu was full of pride nowadays, thanks to the white man.” (828). This shows how traditional African culture was very restrictive, class hierarchy discriminative and prejudice fulfilled. On the other hand, it also shows how the “white culture” was tearing neighbors, furthermore nationality, apart. It sat barrier between people who have different religion because Christians started teaching their next generations to be apart from other religion, even not to eat with them. Christianity changed people deeply, from their lifestyle to their conduct. Traditional spiritual religion looked it as “insanity.” Overall, people who stayed with” African religion” was offended by how “white religion” makes people change and invading their norms and traditions.

Chinua also shows difference between two culture by comparing role of education. Chike’s grandmother was once converted into Christianity, but later renounced. She obviously raised by traditional religion. From her point of view, the diviner man was the most respectful and she looked up to him. He was” a man of great power and wisdom” (828). The diviner man wasn’t an educated man. He has more of practical experience and  knowledge of life; and that is what Chike’s grandmother had respect for. It seemed education wasn’t important for her. In fact, she might resemble all the people who have African culture. In contrast, Chike, the person who raised by “white culture”, had respect for his teacher because he was such a well educated man who like to use sophisticated English words and show off his elevated education. Education was definitely intrigues Chike and it was important him. By having “white culture”, Chike could learn about sciences and expand his knowledge. It gives him freedom to think and not to restricted by prejudices that African culture had.

 

Chinua Achebe, “Chike’s School Days” (1960) Ama Ata Aidoo, “Two Sisters” (1970)

Chinua Achebe

Chike’s last name, Obiajulu, means “the mind at last is at rest” (Page 827) in the Igbo language. The meaning of this seems to be obvious to the people of his community, that he is his family’s only child or only son since his parents wouldn’t need to worry about having their family name die out. However, after reading the second page of this short story, the meaning of Obiajulu can instead refer to how the mind itself is at rest and no longer active. In Chike’s community, he is classified as an Osu, the lowest caste in the Igbo class system and would be expected to be looked down upon but he instead looks down on his neighbor and calls her a heathen for not following in the ways of the white man. Under any normal circumstance no four year old boy would dare call their neighbor a heathen let alone do so fully meaning it and even if the neighbor did not control herself, whatever actions she may have committed would have been justified. It is also interesting to note that during one of Chike’s classes they sang in honor of Caesar, a man who may have been ruler of his world at one point, but was ultimately backstabbed and murdered by those he trusted.

Ama Ata Aidoo

The two sisters Mercy and Connie, while having very similar lives, are so very different. On the one hand you have Connie, a married woman who has a baby with another on the way who works as a school teacher. On the other, you have Mercy, a typist who has affairs with rich, well-known, and older men. Although they have opposing personalities and beliefs, they are two sides of the same coin as their lives are actually nearly the same. While dutiful to her husband, Connie knows that her husband has affairs with many other women but is seemingly fine with this as she states : “Because I love James. I love James and I am not interested in any other man.” (Page 997) Mercy responds to this short excerpt with contempt as she does not understand why her sister lets the husband get away with having affairs while not indulging in the act as well. Although having many romantic pursuits, Mercy denies the men who truly appreciate her for herself as they all lack wealth and prestige and so she has affairs with those who will grant her expensive gifts. These two sisters are unique in that one is a woman who knows her husband has affairs with other women while the other is a woman who is the one having affairs with other women’s husbands. It is also surprising that Connie’s husband attempts to use the fact that Mercy is having affairs with influential men to his family’s own advantage. A story lacking morals, and two main characters in harsh conditions, would you rather be in Connie’s shoes or Mercy’s new shoes – gifted to her by Mensar-Arthur?

Chike’s School Days

Chinua Achebe’s “Chike’s School Days” has a title that is misleading, but this title effectively draws attention to some of the realities of the effects of the West on the lives of Afticans. The story tells of a Chike, an only son, who was raised “in the ways of the white man.” Raised as a Christian, Chike has the opportunity to go to school to learn subjects such as arithmetic and English. He grows fond of English and admits that some English words “simply filled him with elation.” Chike’s exposure to a new language and culture has stretched his imagination and filled him with possibilities that he would not have considered had he grown up in the same way as his ancestors had for generations. As far as Chike is concerned, his Western education has been mostly positive and admittedly saw the stories and literature as he said as “a window through which he saw the distance in a strange, magical world. And he was happy.” What Chike does not understand is what he loses as a result of the Christian influence on his culture. While the title of this story is “Chike’s School Days,” Achebe wisely pays attention to the causes of Chike’s unique childhood. Achebe tells of an instance where Chike refuses the food of a neighbor because she is a “heathen.” Chike belongs to the lowest class of his community but Christianity has given him the feeling of superiority to his neighbor. Achebe also focuses on the chain of events that have led Chike’s father to this social class and acknowledges that he has wandered away from the main idea of the story. I believe that Achebe deliberately gave his short story a misleading title and deviated from the “main story” in order to make the reader question the influence of Christianity on Africans. An account of the different experiences that Chike had as a child would have little meaning without a background to his situation. This story calls attention to the changes that communities such as Chike’s were experiencing as a result of Christian influence and gives the reader the opportunity to understand the pros and cons of this influence. Whether these changes are positive or negative remain to be seen but the structure of this story hints at the author’s attitude towards the situation.