I like the story that was made. It sounds really generic and something that is often said by many people. A lot of people are barely making a living and those that obtain grants are often not given to those of color.
I like how you made it seem authentic through language, making it seem like a video anyone can come across on tiktok.
I love how you made up the story and used visuals to almost keep us busy. That’s normally what a tik tok is nowadays with a story to tell and visuals. Also using a realistic scenario and not an improbable situation.
I like how you created two characters to show emotion through situations they both faced
I like how you used TikTok as the medium for your message as it tends to get points across a lot better. The story was genuine, and it can be very relatable to students of color (specifically Black students) as the system is fundamentally built upon the discrimination of other races. With that being said, it also greatly impacts our schooling system and that’s something that I think you portrayed nicely.
I like the way that this video made engaging but informative and it gives us the motivation to go and do something about this crisis “Student loans” and “cost of tuition” , we need to change the situation that we came to be in as a country and as society
Tiktok as a medium is definitely a unique one. I liked how you were able to entertain yet inform your audience of your message.
I liked the accuracy of your TikTok’s imitation of the Reddit voiceover genre. The story you created is a plausible one, which highlights the inequality you discuss in your essay.
This is a unique way of making a video, when I listened to the story you told while watching your entertainment, to express through this example that many people are barely making ends meet and those who receive grants often do not give to people of color.
Very interesting way to remix this project, It felt like a tiktok that I would come across on a regular basis and the choice of the narrator is a very common voice and the gameplay made it easy to sit through the video
I like your story and it also attracting people to look at the game that you are playing. It is like I was playing the game but also listening something like a broadcast.
I think this experience is common but not often talked about. I feel like a lot of people say things like “just go to college” but dont really consider the financial struggles that some people have to go through. I think this remix highlights that experience.
A nice simplistic story that outlines the struggles that people of color have to deal with especially when it comes to paying for their education and tuition costs as they tend to come from lower-income families where they already struggle to stay afloat.
I LOVE watching subway surfers content so this was very fun. This was very true to the content I enjoy most, reddit stories with games so I think this was a genius formula
I like the story that was made. It sounds really generic and something that is often said by many people. A lot of people are barely making a living and those that obtain grants are often not given to those of color.
I like how you made it seem authentic through language, making it seem like a video anyone can come across on tiktok.
I love how you made up the story and used visuals to almost keep us busy. That’s normally what a tik tok is nowadays with a story to tell and visuals. Also using a realistic scenario and not an improbable situation.
I like how you created two characters to show emotion through situations they both faced
I like how you used TikTok as the medium for your message as it tends to get points across a lot better. The story was genuine, and it can be very relatable to students of color (specifically Black students) as the system is fundamentally built upon the discrimination of other races. With that being said, it also greatly impacts our schooling system and that’s something that I think you portrayed nicely.
I like the way that this video made engaging but informative and it gives us the motivation to go and do something about this crisis “Student loans” and “cost of tuition” , we need to change the situation that we came to be in as a country and as society
Tiktok as a medium is definitely a unique one. I liked how you were able to entertain yet inform your audience of your message.
I liked the accuracy of your TikTok’s imitation of the Reddit voiceover genre. The story you created is a plausible one, which highlights the inequality you discuss in your essay.
This is a unique way of making a video, when I listened to the story you told while watching your entertainment, to express through this example that many people are barely making ends meet and those who receive grants often do not give to people of color.
Very interesting way to remix this project, It felt like a tiktok that I would come across on a regular basis and the choice of the narrator is a very common voice and the gameplay made it easy to sit through the video
I like your story and it also attracting people to look at the game that you are playing. It is like I was playing the game but also listening something like a broadcast.
I think this experience is common but not often talked about. I feel like a lot of people say things like “just go to college” but dont really consider the financial struggles that some people have to go through. I think this remix highlights that experience.
A nice simplistic story that outlines the struggles that people of color have to deal with especially when it comes to paying for their education and tuition costs as they tend to come from lower-income families where they already struggle to stay afloat.
I LOVE watching subway surfers content so this was very fun. This was very true to the content I enjoy most, reddit stories with games so I think this was a genius formula