Realism and Naturalism . Or Ben Galim

Realism in the basic is a movement of artists and writers that tried to represent events and social conditions as they actually are, without idealization (“the process by which scientific models assume facts about the phenomenon being modeled that are strictly false but make models easier to understand or solve.”)  Realism focused on the truthful of everyday life, focuses more on literary technique unlike naturalism that implies on philosophical position and scientific studies. The Naturalist describes a type of literature that attempts to apply scientific principles of objectivity and detachment to its study of human beings. The term was invented by Emile Zola, which I personally admire because of is brave letter “j’accuse” (I accuse) to French president after Dreyfus trial, a French Jewish artillery officer whose trial and conviction in 1894 on charges of treason only because he was Jewish.

One of the stories we read that involved both terms is the story “Separate Way” by Higuchi Ichiyo shows part of the reality of japan in the 19 century. Ichiyo write her own life of suffering into the story’s major characters of the small boy with abnormal growth Kichizo and the young seamstress Okyo. At the age of 11, parents removed her from school because girls commonly received limited formal education in nineteenth-century Japan.
At 17, her father died and she was left responsible for her family.

She also shows the character Kichizō is always pessimist he always expects the worst to happens, Can’t deal with change very well. It’s realistic because this is base on her real life and how she felt at this time.

Naturalism and Realism – Villa’s blog

Realism is used to reveal to readers the everyday, real life activities in society. In contrast to Romanticism, a movement in which authors liked ot write elaborate stories, realism depicted the common experiences of people. It is based on a worldview that bases its foundation on experiences, science, and reasoning. Naturalism stems off of realism; authors that use naturalism usually write stories that take place in a destitute and oppressive environment in order to show the poor social conditions and pressures that people faced in real life during those times. Readers are able to get a sense of the daily experiences and hardships that people actually faced. For example, the story “Separate Way” uses naturalism and realism to show the realistic hardships that many people faced in Japan during the nineteenth century.

In the story “Separate Way” written by Higuchi Ichiyo, the two main characters, Okyo and Kichizo, represent two different parts of the author’s life. One night, Okyo tells Kichizo that she must move away; although he does not want her to, the author shows the readers that Okyo has no choice in what she wants to do; in order to live a better life, she must become someone’s mistress. This reflects the author’s life because at the age of 11, she was forced to leave school since many girls living in nineteenth century Japan had very little education and were expected to work at home. This incorporates Naturalism because it shows the reality of the experiences and lack of choice that many Japanese girls had.

The other character, Kichizo, had birth parents who had died a long time ago and was taken in by the former umbrella factory’s owner, Omatsu. Unfortunately, Omatsu died two years ago by jumping into a well. Therefore, Kichizo was very upset when he learned that Okyo was going to move because he had so many expereiences of being abandoned by his loved one. This reflects the writer’s life, as well as many others, who have been abandoned by their loved ones. When Higuchi Ichiyo was 17, her father died, leaving her responsible for the family. This also relates to realism because this is bases on a real life experience.

I Am an Honest man

Cindy Chan


I Am an Honest Man

I am an honest man
From where the palm grows
And before I die I wish
To fling my verses from my soul.

Out of the gate, Martí sets the tone for the rest of the poem — raw, poignant, and sincere.

I come from everywhere
And I am going toward everywhere:

Martí is a man who’s seen many things and been to many places.

Among the arts, I am art
In the mountains, I am a mountain.

He is one with all that he experiences. Martí is empathetic.

I know the strange names
of the herbs and flowers
And of mortal deceits
And of sublime pains.

He is familiar with the nature and of all living things, be they plants or human.

I have seen in the dark night
Rain over my head
The pure rays of lightning
Of divine beauty.

He has seen hope in his darkest of times.

I saw wings born in men
Of beautiful women:
And coming out of rubbish
Butterflies flying.

He provides symbols of hope.

I have seen a man live
With his dagger at his side,
Without ever saying the name
Of she who had killed him.

He knew a man who never spoke of the woman that broke his heart.

Rapid, like a reflection,
I saw my soul, twice
When the poor old man died,
When she said good-bye to me.

He recalls the events that rocked him to the core: his father’s death and his lover’s departure.

I trembled once–at the fence,
At the entrance to the vineyard–
When a barbarous bee
Stung my daughter in the forehead.

He remembers the time the fear he felt when his daughter was stung by a bee. This perhaps to alludes to Spain’s attack on Cuba.

I felt joy once, such that
Nobody ever felt such joy: when
The mayor read the sentence
Of my death, crying.

He felt the greatest joy imaginable when he knew of his eventual martyrdom.

I hear a sigh, across
The lands and the sea
And it is not a sigh, it is
That my son is going to wake up.

He hears the people’s despair, then he realizes it’s instead the rousing of a nation from its slumber.

They say that from the jeweler
I took the best jewel,
I took a sincere friend
And left love aside.

He has gained the treasure of friendship, which he values more than romantic love.

This poem is fraught with patriotic and intimate sentiments. Martí never explicitly expressed his political beliefs, yet we can sense their manifestation in his exploration of the human emotions. These are the cries of a man who loves and fears for his country.

N.B. This poem is not printed in its entirety in the anthology.

 

 

“The Tyger” William Blake – Or Ben Galim

Tyger Tyger, burning bright,
In the forests of the night;
What immortal hand or eye,
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies.
Burnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand, dare seize the fire?

And what shoulder, & what art,
Could twist the sinews of thy heart?
And when thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand? & what dread feet?

What the hammer? what the chain,
In what furnace was thy brain?
What the anvil? what dread grasp,
Dare its deadly terrors clasp!

When the stars threw down their spears
And water’d heaven with their tears:
Did he smile his work to see?
Did he who made the Lamb make thee?

Tyger Tyger burning bright,
In the forests of the night:
What immortal hand or eye,
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?

 

This is an interesting poem, William Blake is describing a tiger. In the beginning of the poe, he describes the tiger as an extremely scary and frightening creature; he then continues and asks himself why would God create such a beautiful and horrifying animal. When he says “Did he who made the Lamb make thee?” I believe he is doubting if all God makes is positive in this life. In my opinion, Blake mentions the Lamb as the antonym for the tiger, the lamb is a sweet and joyful animal which is associated with God through many texts, while the tiger is a dangerous creature. I see this poem as short and entertaining, and it is similar to “The Lamb” also written by him, yet the meaning behind them are polar opposites.

“Alone” BY EDGAR ALLAN POE-Or Ben Galim

From childhood’s hour I have not been
As others were—I have not seen
As others saw—I could not bring
My passions from a common spring—
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow—I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone—
And all I lov’d—I lov’d alone—
Then—in my childhood—in the dawn
Of a most stormy life—was drawn
From ev’ry depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still—
From the torrent, or the fountain—
From the red cliff of the mountain—
From the sun that ’round me roll’d
In its autumn tint of gold—
From the lightning in the sky
As it pass’d me flying by—
From the thunder, and the storm—
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view—
First of all I chose to read Edgar Allan Poe’s poems since I recently finished watching a TV series called “The Following” which is based on an assassin who idolizes Poe and kills based on his poems; therefore I got to familiarize with the type of person Edgar Allan Poe was.
This poem conveys the aloneness he felt and how outcast he perceived himself as . What he is trying to convey to the readers is how different he has always been since growing up. He didn’t see what the others saw or got excited with what made others ecstatic and his heart did not get as content as the other children’s did.
The poem contains end rhymes which makes it interesting and entertaining to read, yet the literal message behind is not positive at all. What got into me the most was the last bit of the poem when he describes nature’s beautiful things like the sun and autumns gold yet in a second he talks about thunders and storms because this is the issue he was having inside as a child; he saw how everyone enjoyed life and he just felt a gray cloud inside him. He re emphasizes this point in his two last stanzas, where he says how the heavens where blue but he only saw demons instead.

Emily Dickinson – Mina Park

‘Twas warm-at first-like Us
Until there crept upon
A Chill-like frost upon a Glass-
Till all the scene-be gone.

 

The Forehead copied Stone-
The Fingers grew too cold
To ache-and like a Skater’s Brook-
The busy eyes-congealed-

 

It straightened-that was all-
It crowded Cold to Cold
It multiplied indifference-
As Pride were all it could-

 

And even when with Cords-
‘Twas lowered, like a Weight-
It made no Signal, nor demurred,
But dropped like Adamant.

 

In the beginning of the poem I thought it was going to about lovers, but when I got to the end it seemed more death related. I didn’t think it was more about death until the last stanza where she said “‘Twas lowered, like a Weight- …. But dropped like Adamant” It gave me an imagery of a person’s coffin being lowered to the ground or a person literally just dropping dead. With this in mind, when I reread the poem, it became a lot more clearer.
The first stanza shows a comparison between a living person and a dying one. “‘Twas warm-at first-like Us” shows that the dying person was once just as warm as it’s suppose to be. Dickinson shows that death doesn’t hit a person, but instead creates an illusion of it creeping up on a person and slowly turning them cold. Dickinson doesn’t seem to directly address the dying body until the 3rd stanza. She calls the body “it” and it feels like she’s indifferent towards the dying person. The poem in its entirety feels cold because all the references she’s making to show the chilling body. “Frost upon a Glass”, “Skater’s Brook”, “Forehead copied Stone” all gave me feelings of a cold touch.
Two things I found standing out to me was the way she capitalized some words and the dashes throughout the poem. Perhaps she wanted to emphasize the important words by capitalizing the first letter. The dashes throughout the poem also seem to slow down the pace of the poem. I feel like they’re important because it makes the poem more slow paced and draws out the imagery more. If the poem didn’t have its dashes, it would seem more hurried and I feel as though it wouldn’t give the reader the same feeling the poem gives with its dashes.

Song by Christina Rossetti – Gary’s post

SONG

by: Christina Rossetti

WHEN I am dead, my dearest,

Sing no sad songs for me;

From the first sentence, we can see the topic of this poem is death. In the second sentence, Rossetti is telling her loved ones not to mourn over her death, either because she is trying to cheer them up and tell them to forget about her or she has already accepted death and she doesn’t need sad songs.

Plant thou no roses at my head,

Nor shady cypress tree:

Be the green grass above me

With showers and dewdrops wet;

These four lines contain words that are related to nature such as roses, trees, grass, showers and dewdrops. Since these words are related to nature and life, and when Rossetti says I don’t need any of this, it’s to strengthen her point in the second line, that she accepts death and is telling her loved ones to forget about her.

And if thou wilt, remember,

And if thou wilt, forget.

These two lines are interesting because they contradict each other. One of them says to remember and the other says to forget, but I’m not really sure what message the author is trying to convey here.

 

I shall not see the shadows,

I shall not feel the rain;

I shall not hear the nightingale

Sing on, as if in pain;

And dreaming through the twilight

That doth not rise nor set,

The second stanza is different from the first stanza. The first stanza used words relating to nature and life, but in the second stanza we see darker words, such as shadows, rain, pain, and twilight. I think the author is trying to describe how it’s like to be dead because “she is dreaming through the twilight” and she’s forgetting her loved ones, who are the shadows, who are singing in pain and maybe the rain is referring to tears.

Haply I may remember,

And haply may forget.

Here we see the contradiction again with the words remember and forget.

Edgar Allan Poe “A Dream within a Dream” (published 1850)

Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow —
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand —
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep — while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

This poem represents Edgar Allan Poe’s view on life that we are all living life’s big dream, where our inner dreams are merely a function of our own mind. Poe believes that his life is like a dream. He stands on the shore of the ocean, holding grains of sand and is weeping. He cannot keep the sand from running out of his hand, and is is comparing it to his own life. As in, life is always slipping away through our fingers like the sand in Poe’s hands (haha did not mean to rhyme but cannot substitute any other words). When sand is held loosely, it will sit in your palm, but if you try to grasp it for a firm hold you loose more control of what little you have. He compares holding the sand to dreaming. Therefore, if you hold on too tight to your dream you end up making it all fall apart (wake up). When Poe holds on to the sand too tight it slips away so like a dream the more you become aware of it (lucid dreaming), the more likely you are waking up from it. Thus loosing the happy place that you are dreaming about. In addition, I think subconsciously whatever you dream about are your goals in life that being success, reconciling with particular people, living a lavish lifestyle, the list goes on and on. The waves he is mentioning are in a way the obstacles we go through in life bringing us down. If you think about it literally if he uses a little water from the shore and places it in his palm with the sand it will become more sturdy and more successful to grasp without having it slip away. But thinking about it in terms of oneself you can say the waves are the obstacles that are making you grow, learn from your mistakes and use the lessons to solidify your goal.

 

 

-341- Emily Dickinson, Sze

341

After great pain, a formal feeling comes –
The Nerves sit ceremonious, like Tombs –
The stiff Heart questions ‘was it He, that bore,
And Yesterday, or Centuries before?
The Feet, mechanical, go round –
A Wooden way
Of Ground, or Air, or Ought –
Regardless grown,
A Quartz contentment, like a stone –
This is the Hour of Lead –
Remembered, if outlived,
As Freezing persons, recollect the Snow –
First – Chill – then Stupor – then the letting go –
After I read the poem over and over, I think Emily Dickinson was trying to express a feeling or an emotion by describing the details the physical body changing. As my understanding, Dickinson told the very true feeling and human’s natural reaction. Obviously, she wanted to bring up the feeling after suffering in pain or a shock in the very first sentence. I would say the pain was a spiritual pain after something happened so sudden. Dickinson used “tombs” to indicate the shut-down nerves after the shock. Then, she said “the stiff heart questions…” that I can truly understand that feeling that my heart keeps asking, but I don’t really want to know the answer since I may not be able to bear the truth.
In the second stanza, I like the first two sentences a lot because I have the same reaction when I suffer something unexpected: walk mechanically like a machine to nowhere. But I could tell the second stanza is a bit different than Dickinson’s typically writing since the second stanza has 5 lines in short forms. I questioned myself that should I read “A wooden way” and “Regardless grown,” together, but I still can’t understand these two lines. I wondered if she wanted to say we have to live and grow no matter what happened, but why a wooden way? This made me stuck. And then, I read it as: we should be tough and be satisfied with what we have.
In the third stanza, I like the whole ending. As what I understood, she said we have to wake up from the machine-walk and back to the reality to live our life even it is a cruel one. I would say she might write this poem in the winter time since she mentioned snow and chill. “As freezing persons……..then the letting go-” corresponded to the previous stanza: “freezing person” was whom suffered pain;”chill” was indicated to the stiff heart; and “the stupor” was talking about the mechanical feet. At the end, she said “the letting go-” means we have to let go the all the pain and live.
This poem extends my interest in Emily Dickinson. I looked up her website “Emily Dickinson Museum”, and found the “Tips for Reading Dickinson’s Poetry” and then I followed the instructions to read the poem over again. I think I understand more. I like how Dickinson broke a sentence to words and the dashes make everyone can substitute their own stories into the poem. I found Emily was the woman of foresight in the 19th century and she had great observations.

After Death by Christina Rossetti (Jonathan Frieling)

Christina Rossetti was a Romantic poet who lived in the 19th century in England. It is interesting to note that her pen name is Ellen Alleyne. I tried looking as to why she chose the name Ellen but I could not find a sufficient answer. If anyone has any thoughts please let me know. I can almost write an entire blog post on why people change their names and whether or not I agree with it. Christina was a devout Anglican and wrote a lot of religious poetry. Her most famous work was the “Goblin Market”, written in 1862. Christina passed away at the young age of 64 due to Graves Disease.

The first two lines of the poem are:

The curtains were half drawn, the floor was swept

And strewn with rushes, rosemary and may.”

I loved this introduction! I think it is very important that the writer informs the reader the setting. After reading these first two lines I was able to paint an image in my mind. I imagined a dimly lit room with the sunlight being the only source of light in the room. The bed was covered with red and white flowers that one would see at a funeral parlor or cemetery.

” Where thro’ the lattice ivy-shadow crept.”  The word lattice comes from the Latin word lades. It is a structure made up of wood and metal fastened together with a diamond shaped pieces on the top. To me this sounds very similar to a wooden casket with some decoration on top. After a casket is in the ground for a few years ivy and grass begin to grow on the casket. Perhaps, the author is alluding to a casket? The next three lines in the poem are:

” He leaned above me, thinking that I slept

And could not hear him; but I heard him say: 

Poor child, poor child…”

These three lines solidify my thoughts that the protagonist is in fact in a casket on his bed. When one is sleeping, people do not usually talk to the one in bed unless it is an urgent matter and they wake them up. On the contrary, it is very common for people to speak to a relative or a friend when they are in the hospital and near death even if they are not getting a response. It is very natural to unleash emotion and speak to a loved one. Personally, when my grandfather was very ill and no longer responsive I still spoke to him in bed even though he could not respond and most probably did not hear me. Although he was not responding it was still very therapeutic for me to talk to him.

“He did not touch the shroud, or raise the fold

That hid my face, or take my hand in his.”

I am not quite sure as to why the author is trying to convey with these lines. It seems to me as if Christina is expressing the lack of care by the man who is visiting his loved one. I do not feel that one needs to touch or kiss the dead in order to show true love or compassion. Everyone connects to the dead in his or her own way, and some feel uncomfortable touching a dead body.

“He did not love me living; but once dead

He pitied me; and very sweet it is.”

These two lines confused me and caused me to reread the poem a few times. If he did not love her living, why did he visit after she was dead? I know it is respect to the dead, but was this a visit of pity or love? Anyhow, it is still kind that he visited. The poem ends with the words: ” And very sweet it is to know he still is warm tho I am cold.” I think the protagonist is using sarcasm and is not genuinely happy that he is still warm. I do not know how much she really appreciated the man’s visit. The famous words ” Too little too late”, are a perfect way to describe the theme of this poem. The life lesson that I learned from this poem is take advantage of the “now” moment in life and do not wait until it is too late.