Feature Writing

pitch: mental illness and how it is treated/handled

The recent incident of a woman pushing another woman onto the train tracks and killing her in times square has sparked an interest to look into the state of mental health in America, and New York specifically.

I would like to address how it is being treated today, what steps are being taken to advance treatment and care (what will the President do to help?), what the average citizen’s perspective is on mental illness, and the causes of how it happens.

I will be interviewing a psychologist who deals with mental health, someone who has been affected by it, and someone who does not have much information about it.

I would like to go in depth with a person’s story of a mental health issue and how that person copes in their daily life.

Final Magazine Pitch

For this final pitch, I would like to document my sister’s high school basketball team that made it all the way to the state championship years back. Though they lost it was an outstanding achievement. Never had a team from my high school made it to a state championship game. The team was comprised of major players including a 4-star athlete. For this assignment I would like to do a “Where are they now piece?” where I would document their current lives, see if basketball is still a mainstay in their daily lives, as well as seeing if the term “peaking in high school” is legitimate.

My sister was the manager of that team, so I could get into contact with the coaches and former players rather easily.

Long Form Pitch

For my final project, I want to cover the aging population in New York City’s Chinatown. This invisible community is often overlooked. As members of a close-knit ethnic enclave, their resources are limited. Many have families that have moved out of Manhattan and are uncared for. Unable to speak English, many don’t reach out for government assistance. The result is a supportive community that has learned to adapt.

In addition to profiling some members of this community, I also hope to explore their impact on the changing demographics and gentrification of Chinatown, the cultural impact on elderly care, government assistance, and survival in New York City.

My grandmother works as a cook in one of Chinatown’s major senior citizen centers, so I hope to be able to interview some members of the administration as well as regular attendees. Also, I plan on going to major community centers, aid centers, and meeting places (Columbus Park, bakeries, and places of worship) and interviewing seniors there with the help of a translator.

How the 2016 Presidential Election Setback Journalism

A presidential election is a busy time for news organizations as they provide coverage of the campaign trail leading up to election day and the aftermath.

Certainly news plays an essential role during this event as Americans tune in and primarily rely on journalists to attain information about candidates and their policies.

However, this election year proved to be a setback for American journalism. As Election Day approached, numerous news outlets projected Hillary Clinton would win the election. The public was so assured by the media after months of coverage that when the actual results began to develop everyone was left shocked.

The seemingly impossible had happened.

Donald J. Trump had won the presidency.

How could this have happened and why did nobody see this coming? What went wrong? These were the questions among many Americans that night who had relied on the information provided by the news sources.

On June 16, 2015, Trump first announced he would be running for change promising to make America great again. He immediately caught the attention of news organizations not only because of his celebrity status but his controversial comments in which he accused Mexico of sending people who brought drugs, crime, and rapists.

This was the beginning of numerous controversial remarks he would make throughout his campaign as he gained considerable coverage and was featured extensively on the news for his latest comment. However, the journalistic following he gained never took him seriously as a candidate in his early campaigning.

Instead he seemed like many celebrities on the news today featuring their latest scandal, which appealed to audiences. This status was reason enough for people to believe he would not gain the republican nomination or even still be around in November 2016.

Eventually, he attained the republican nomination in July  2016. These were early signs that he had been underestimated as a candidate and a foreshadowing of November.

Journalists continued coverage as the race was narrowed between Trump and Clinton. By this time, Trump had already gained significant media coverage.

Benjamin Fang, a reporter for the Queens Ledger who followed the election closely, explained that Trump’s status contributed to his attention.  

Trump was certainly the most interesting and entertaining candidate in the race, and it appears airing his speeches made for good television ratings. That often meant more money and clout for the cable news networks,” said Fang.

Ironically, the significant amount of coverage he gained actually ended up cementing his status among his voters.

“During the Republican primary, news organizations, specifically cable news like CNN and MSNBC, tended to show Trump’s speeches nearly in their entirety. That bias allowed voters to see Trump as not just a serious candidate, but for his message to get through without his campaign actually paying for airtime,” said Fang.

By February of 2016 he had earned approximately $2 billion in free media which was twice the amount spent on any entire presidential campaign, according to a New York Times article.

As Election Day approached, polling increased and became prevalent among viewers and readers who were informed Clinton was in the lead. Although coverage continued, the focus was more set on the outcome of the election.  According to the Fang, this was an issue throughout the election race.

“The media often provided horserace coverage and political analysis. But what was severely lacking was a constant focus on the issues,” said Fang.

When the election results were announced, it was these factors on behalf of news media that played a role in the final outcome.

The earlier predictions issued by credible sources such as the New York Times were proven wrong and journalists were left to assess what had happened.

However, this wasn’t the only setback that night for journalism.

It is certain now that the American public’s trust of media will only decline further as a result of this election.

According to U.S. World and News Report, only 32 percent of Americans stated they had a fair amount of trust in the media in September.

Fang stated the outcome will have repercussions on that trust which has also been affected by the public turning towards news that fits their viewpoint.  

More and more people are turning away from trusted news sources like the New York Times or Washington Post in favor of their own partisan media. It’s a trend that has divided the country. Conservatives prefer not just Fox News, but also websites like The Blaze and Breitbart, which often provide shady and untruthful information. Liberals often rely on the same type of media, said Fang.

In addition to this dilemma, Trump has been vocal about his opposition to certain news outlets throughout his presidential campaign. In February, he stated he would “open up libel laws” to allow journalists to be sued when they write “purposely negative and horrible and false articles.” He also blacklisted organizations such as The Washington Post.

These actions would prove to be detrimental to journalist’s

“As journalists, we have to defend our right to report the news and tell the facts, even if we have to go to court,” said Fang. “It means not allowing Trump to bully the media, and even if we’re blacklisted, have the audacity to write about it. The media have to keep the powerful accountable.”

News organizations in the United States will face a long road ahead over the next four years. They must not only regain the public’s trust but also face a President who is openly opposed to them and threatens their duty to report.

During this time, news organizations must reevaluate their coverage, fact checking, and focus on issues not only for a Trump presidency but for future elections ahead.

Magazine Article Pitch

For this final article, I want to investigating how Donald Trump won the election from a pure marketing aspect.

A concept every marketer understand or should understand is that we can’t and shouldn’t target everyone. Segmenting and narrowing the target range is important for creating an effective message to engage and mobilize people. This is what Trump’s campaign about. He doesn’t really care if you hate him. His focus was on getting his supporter out and vote for him on the election day.

Donald Trump’s campaign also did a good job on getting the public to know about him as a presidential candidate. Many of other Republican candidates dropped out, without people even knowing about they were entering the race. However, at the same time, trump was getting all the media coverages, all the eyeballs.

I’m planning to interview Jessica Mahlbacher, a graduate student at CUNY majoring in Political Science. I also plan to interview Steve Gold, CCO from GNF Marketing.

The Rumblings of a Grumpy Baseball Fan

Adrian Gonzalez, the first baseman of the Los Angeles Dodgers, came lumbering towards home plate in the second inning of the fourth game of the National League Championship Series between the Chicago Cubs and the Dodgers. Never once considered fleet of foot during his 13-year career, Gonzalez was banking on the fact that the Cubs outfielder, Jason Heyward, wouldn’t consider Gonzalez a threat as he rounded third base, attempting to score the first run of the game.

The ball seemed to travel through water, as it sailed from right field towards home plate—Gonzalez, to be fair, appeared to be moving through molasses. Finally the ball arrived in the mitt of Cubs catcher Wilson Contreras at the exact moment Gonzalez ascended into his sloppy dive towards the plate. With his arm extended, the Dodger lunged at the plate while Contreras turned to his left to make the tag. Gonzalez’s hand slapped the bag as Contreras’ glove whacked Gonzalez on the nose. The umpire pumped his fist once with vigor—Gonzalez was out.

Three years ago, this emphatic fist pump from the umpire would be the end of the play—and in this situation, the end of the inning. But in the age of instant replay in baseball, this call at the plate, one that supposedly changed the fate of the Dodgers season for the worse, is one that could be called into question.

And indeed it was. The call was challenged and instant replay reared its ugly head into one of the most crucial games of the season for the two competing championship starved teams. In the time it took to review the play about 900 babies were born and not a single shred of new information was revealed.

Instant replay continues to destroy, with the unwieldy force of a wrecking ball, the pace of a sport many already consider too slow.

The appeal of baseball, for me and for many others, is the methodical pace of the game. Each pitch begins with a few seconds of stillness and reflection, an instance to align oneself with the moment. Then the burst—the ball zips out of the pitchers hand and travels nearly 100 miles per hour, faster than most of us have ever traveled by car. The batter swings, adding ten to twenty miles per hour to the ball. The fielders explode from their crouch and lunge towards the speeding ball of leather. The ball is thrown towards first base. Tenths of a second later, the batter slams his foot against the bag. He is out, the play is over, and now we breathe. Smell the grass and the fall air around you, brush off the dirt, and pull the strings tight on your glove. Prepare. Relax. Focus. Breathe. The pitcher begins his motion and here comes the—wait…the manager is calling for instant replay. The immortal pace, the pace adored by fathers and their sons, mothers and daughters, the pace romanticized by poets, idolatrized in the movies, the pace is dead. All it takes is one offbeat. 

Instant replay became a part of baseball at the beginning of the 2014 season. According to the Major League Baseball rulebook, instant replay is “designed to provide timely review of certain disputed calls in all Championship Season, All-Star, and Post-Season games played in the 30 Major League ballparks.” During a game, each team’s manager has access to one “challenge” if the game occurs in the regular season and two if it occurs in the post-season playoffs. Only certain plays can be challenged—for instance, tags at home plate. Balls and strikes are off limits, despite the fact that most television broadcasts’ super-impose a strike zone graphic that shows it’s viewers just how accurate the umpire’s call really is—as though fans need another reason to yell at their televisions.

How is it that we, the fans, and they, the players, coaches, and baseball executives, trust the umpires to judge the accuracy of a ball zipping towards them at an average of 95 miles per hour, but don’t trust them to judge the bang-bang play of a player tagging a runner. Calling balls and strikes is far more difficult than calling outs at the bases, and still umpires make the “right” call, ball or strike, around 85 percent of the time. Without technology their accuracy has been on a steady increase since 2008, according to fivethrityeight.com.

Since 2014, instant replay has expanded and become more embedded in the strategies manager’s and players employ while playing the game. When Gonzalez popped up from his headfirst slide into home and saw the call, he immediately turned towards his coach and wagged his finger saying, “no, no, no.” His manager, Dave Roberts, agreed and called for the challenge. Three years ago, Gonzalez might have run up to the umpire and belched a few harsh words into the face of the official. The umpire would bark back, fans would cheer, and Roberts would rush out of the dugout to come to his player’s defense. This is how calls were disputed in, you know, the good ole’ days. But now, a player’s instinct is to demand that the umpires make a phone call and force everyone else stare at a screen for five minutes, hoping to see something new.

Once a manager decides to challenge a call, the game gets put on hold. Two of the four umpires working the game walk towards the home team’s dugout and get handed two sets of headphones. A mysterious commission, located inside of Major League Baseball headquarters in New York City, reviews the play from multiple angles and communicates back to the umpires what they see. The members of the commission are completely anonymous and for good reason—I know a few people that would most likely engage these replay watchers in violence if given the chance. A challenged call can be confirmed, reversed, or it can stand, meaning there wasn’t enough evidence to overturn or confirm it. Whatever the commission says, goes.

“Instant replay destroys the humanity of the game,” says Neil J. Sullivan, a professor of public affairs at Baruch College who has written extensively on baseball and it’s history in American society. “It replaces the natural with the chemical.”

Baseball used to have games within the game. Fans watching from the stands or on TV were completely unaware of the little games played between players and umpires. Expanding strike zones, calls made out of spite, or calls made as reparations for a bungled call from the previous inning. Baseball, historically, is a moral game, exemplified by these calls of judgment. But computers have no morals and, in some cases, they even corrupt our own.

Before instant replay and the jumbo-tron, fans would turn to each other between innings to discuss the big moments they just witnessed. Instant replay cheapens these conversations. While the umpires talk to New York, the fans, both at the stadium and at home, watch the replay over and over again from different angles, each one less conclusive than the one before it. On television broadcasts, a split screen is shown— one shows the replay and the other bounces from the player’s reaction and discussion, to the umpires staring idle at the ground while they receive instructions. The broadcasters weigh in on what they think. “Oh yeah, he’s out,” one may say. “Hey, look at that, from that angle he looks like he’s safe,” may say the other. “Good challenge,” says one. “Oh wait, bad challenge.” People at home have an almost identical conversation.

At the stadium, the crowd cheers for their home team. As the jumbo-tron shows the replay, fans cheer if the call made favors the home team and boo if it doesn’t. People see what they want to see, even when what they are seeing is a 200-foot tall baseball player falling towards home plate and clearly getting smacked in the face by a glove with a ball in it. “He’s safe!” they yell. “Please god, no, make it stop, please, oh god no,” I think aloud. The most damning fact about instant replay is that in the end, only half of the challenged calls are overturned, according to Nate Silver of fivethirtyeight.com.

Baseball has been the slowest sport to utilize technology and move into the 21st century. The National Football League experimented with instant replay in 1978 but didn’t implement it fully until 1985. Instant replay came to the National Basketball Association in 2002. But beyond instant replay, technology became an integral part of football and basketball with the installation of the jumbo-tron. Before the mammoth television commanded only basketball and football fans to clap or cheer, or, most importantly, buy, buy, buy. In 2015, after a jumbo-sized episode of public outcry, Wrigley Field, the home to the Chicago Cubs, and the last vestige of hold-outs, adapted the jumbo-tron. All 30 MLB stadiums now have them and each one of them exists for the sole purpose of selling and distracting.

The jumbo-tron, like instant replay, distorts the pace of the sport. Innings are broken up by pointless games like “kiss cams”, and mascot races. Commercials are shown between pitches. The tension on the field goes unnoticed to those with their eyes on the massive screen. This is one of the biggest tragedies of technology in baseball.

Baseball has been a fixture in the fabric of this country since before the Civil War. As the world has changed, the game has changed too, but these recent changes in a quickly changing world go too far and in the wrong direction. Sullivan explains that sports fans go through a cycle. When they are young, they like sports in general, baseball being one of them. As they enter their teenage years and fill up with angst and rage, they gravitate towards the quicker and more violent sports like football, basketball, and hockey. But as they grow into their late twenties and their bodies begin to slow for the first time, they soon rediscover the comfort of baseball. The violence and stress of the work day pushes them towards something that will help them relax and uncoil. Something like baseball. But this only works if the pace of the game is the same as it was when you were a child, or when your father was a child, or his father. Alas, instant replay and the jumbo-tron say foo to you and your father’s game too. Oh, the good ole’ days, if only we could rewind and replay you.

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Final Pitch

For this article, I wanted to write about something that affected many of us but has not been written about this angle in any of the major magazines or news outlets (at least not as far as I’m aware of)–how Trump’s election affected college campuses.

For this article, I would center on the effects of a Trump presidency on Baruch. The college has held an event in the Bearcat Den on Wednesday, Nov. 9 and is planning to hold another one this week to give students a safe space where they can discuss how they were affected. Students have received emails from the school advertising our counseling center and the fact that in Baruch, all political views should be respected.

However, there were incidents. Several people reported being harassed to security and the Office of Student Life. The counseling center is packed, showing that people see a need to talk about this event in a safe space.

This feature would be largely based on interviews with students and members of the administration to get both sides of the story. In the end, it would be an in-depth feature about how Baruch was affected by the Trump elections. Seeing the events that took place in The New School and protests in college campuses across the nation, I think that this is a story that goes beyond Baruch.

Final Pitch

I am writing about social media’s impact in relationship on a day-to-day basis. Basically, how the rise of social media has revealed a breaking point in relationships to make individuals check their self esteem through likes and texts. When the screen on your phone lights up, the immediate reaction is to check and see what it is. Social media presence has shifted from mere fun and games. It has taken on the shape of being an addiction. One interview with a couple went like this: they fought over a like on someone else’s page. In rage, the boyfriend goes out with his friends and his friends post pictures of him with them. The girlfriend sees the picture and decides this is the end of the relationship. In one night, a relationship that was once thriving and healthy has turned into a crumbling relationship built with toothpicks.

I am also going to interview couples and single people alike.With interviews from Baruch communication professors, Denise Patrick & Elisabeth Gareis, I plan to reference them through their studies of intercultural and interpersonal communication. The professors will weigh in on the cultural standpoints as well as a communicative structural standpoint.

Final Feature Pitch

I would like to write a feature/op-ed geared towards Complex magazine about comic book conventions. I think my article would fit in will with Complex because it discusses normal pop culture as well as popular video games, comic books, and superhero movies.

Comic book conventions have more to them than meets the eye. They have expanded to so many different mediums of pop culture, and there is something for everyone. It isn’t just Star Wars and superheroes. You can meet celebrities from popular shows and movies and find merchandise from just about anything. A lot of the fun of the conventions is the sense of community and excitement, and everyone should go at least once!

I will discuss the different topics covered at conventions and interview multiple convention goers, as well as try to reach out to popular comic con vendors.