Remediation First Draft
Writer’s Letter
For my remediation project, I have decided to take the videos I included as sources in my research essay and incorporate them into a mashup. So far, I have obtained all the videos I had mentioned. I just need to organize them in a way so that the video transitions well. I have also pulled some tweets online to find people who have ever said anything negative about homeless people. I searched up keywords such as: homeless, crazy, dirty, etc. into the Twitter search bar and looked through some tweets. I think this will really showcase the opinions that exist within our population. I’m not quite sure what else to include in the video outside my sources and the tweet idea. I am aware that the first few images of the tweets need to be made longer so viewers have time to read. I am also going to change the last part into something different so viewers do not have to read so much. What do you suggest I do with that information?
Questions:
- Should I include music to my video?
- What else would you suggest I add that would strengthen my thesis?