I enjoy writing, and kind of take pride on it. That is why I was in shock when my english proffesor, Proff. Carl Rollyson, send back the firsrt draft of my essay with a “D grade. It is just the first draft and i suppose he wants us our writing to evolve.
Perhaps I got carreid away by my teachers in high school who were delgihted with my use of vocabulary, but who didn’t told me that i was wrting “WAY TOO OBVIOUS PHRASES”