Subject Line: LAB WRITE UP BIO 1011- Derny Fleurima
Hello Dr. Schulman,
This is Derny Fleurima. I hope you’re doing well. I am writing this email to you with regards to the lab write up that we must hand in on Monday. My group’s data for Beaker #3 (hypotonic solution) was skewed due to a leak in our dialysis bag. I was wondering if it is okay to use another group’s data for the write up because it would allow for me to accurately answer the questions. Furthermore, with regards to Experiment II, am I to answer the questions that are in the explaining paragraphs, or am I just to explain the data and provide the drawings?
Thank you,
Derny Fleurima
Baruch College
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Hi Derny,
Pretty convincing I must say. However, you forgot to add subject line and there are huge gaps between your name and Thank you. I hope you will be more careful in an actual email.
Best,
Shanima
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Oh. I see what you’re saying. I have a computerized copy of my signature in that space that didn’t copy. Also I used a subject line of course when I sent it, I just didn’t put it here. I’ll fix it.
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Yeah it pasted weird, but is that okay.
Yup that looks good. Derny take off your phone number and signature(if it’s your original signature). i don’t think it’s a good idea for general public to have that kind of information. We will talk more about it in class.