Free Indirect Discourse

Soyon stepped out the revolving door of her apartment at 9:55 a.m. She first saw some fallen leaves on the street, and think winter is coming. She likes winter rather than any other seasons, and she is so happy about the semester is ending soon. She walks to the 6 train. First, she turns left to the East side, and walks to the Park ave. She saw her neighbors on the porch. Somehow, she is worried about the book she has not finished reading for today. Should I wake up earlier to finish the reading? She keeps walking to the Lexington ave. She gets the Lexington ave., and walks into the subway. Oh, the 6 train is 14 minutes delayed. She freaks out. She thinks she should have woke up early. She regrets. Anyhow, the train runs as express, and she finally arrived on time, and gets 23rd street. After she gets out of the subway to upstairs, and she is finally relieved. She walks on the 23rd street to the Lexington ave. When she gets on the Lexington ave., and turns to the left side to get 25th street. She buys a cup of coffee in front of her school, and walks into the entrance to get her class.