a limited edition city
3 04 2009Throughout the underground passageways through the cities, through the ground level of time square, you will inevitably hear music coming from down the train car or down the block. You never encounter the same mariachi band twice. The various selections of musical tracks that are offered right before our eyes grab the commuter’s attention.
i really like the topic of the paper. however, i think that there is some confusion about what it is exactly. is it about all musical genres or only mariachi bands? also would it help the paper if you changed “through” to a different word, it was repeated pretty often. i look forward to reading the whole paper.