11-29-22 Research-based argumentative essay revision plan

Answer these following questions:

  1. I am writing about ……………………………. I am citing …..#….. sources in my essay.
  2. So far, I have written ….. pages.
  3. My classmates commented on …………………
  4. After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are 1….2….
  5. I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (time duration) on (date).

21 thoughts on “11-29-22 Research-based argumentative essay revision plan”

  1. 1) I am writing about social media, and I plan to cite up to 5 sources in my essay.
    2) So far, I have written two pages.
    3) My classmates commented that I should add a title and a few more paragraphs.
    4) I am planning on writing more and going in-depth into my writing.
    5) I do, and I will do my best to meet the expectations.

  2. 1)I am about to writing mental health of young and older generation.
    2)I have writing about 6 pages so far.
    3) My class comment on shorting my introduction and needing a title
    4)After reviewing I am about to add in text citation and add a title.
    5) I plan to go to the library this whole week to work on my class for have it on time.

  3. 1- I am writing about mental health among college students and how covid affected it. I am citing 3 sources in my essay
    2-So, far I have written 4 pages
    3- My classmates commented on my thesis statement and research question. It should be more clear.
    4- the next steps I am planning to do is:
    1- re-arranged my paragraphs to make them easy to follow
    2- Combine topics to make the thesis clear.
    5- I plan to work on the essay for 3-4 hours on 11/30 and 12/1.

  4. 1. I am writing about The future of office work from home after COVID I am citing #4 sources in my essay.
    2. So far, I have written 2 pages.
    3. My classmates commented on my overall process in continuing through my body paragraphs.
    4. After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are 1. to formulate a more concrete research question 2. Body paragraphs should be structured more thoroughly.
    5. I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (time duration) on (date).

  5. 1.I am writing about Gender Disparity. I am citing 3 sources in my essay.
    2.So far, I have written 5 pages.
    3.My classmates commented on that I should add more details and transitions words.
    4.After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are find more reasoning and add more to it.
    5.I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for before 12 AM on the due date.

  6. 1. I am writing about how gender roles are affected by covid 19, specifically women? I am citing 7 sources in my essay.
    2. So far, I have written 6 pages.
    3. My classmates commented on my introduction.
    4. After reviewing the comments I have received, the following steps I am planning to do are to fix my introduction and write another paragraph.
    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (2 hours ) on (29 Nov).

  7. I am writing about the failure of remote learning I am citing 5 # sources in my essay.
    So far, I have written 5 pages.
    My classmates commented on why needing to explain my evidence more thoroughly and adding a bit more of my opinion
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the following steps I am planning to do are 1 further explain my evidence and 2 add more about my personal opinions
    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (three hours) on (Nov 29).

  8. I am writing about covid and mental health.
    I am citing …..#….. sources in my essay.
    So far, I have written 7 pages.
    My classmates commented on grammatical issues, and that references are not in alphabetical order
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are to refine the whole paper, make it flow smoother and order reference list in alphabetical order. oh and to refine write cover letter as well.

    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (time duration) on (date).

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  9. I am writing how women were affected by COVID-19 . I am citing more 9 source in my essay. So far I have written 6 pages. My classmates commented on expanding the affects women face in society and the different treatments between both gender.After reviewing the comments I will manage to make my quotations shorter, paraphrasing and incorporate my counterclaimI understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay before Dec 5!

  10. I am writing about mental health and COVID.
    So far, I have written 2 and half pages.
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do is to cite all the quotations. And also cite the sources.
    I understand that the final draft is on blackboard on December 5th by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (time duration) on (date).

  11. I am writing about social media and the impact it has on human beings. I am citing about 12 sources in my essay.

    So far I have written two pages.

    I need to work on my intact citation and references. I need to make sure that my details support my argument and that my argument, question, and claim are clear.

    I will sit down and make sure all is corrected, reviewed, and ready to be submitted.

    I plan to work on my essay for 5 hours on December 3rd.

  12. 1. I am writing about how jobs will be different between 2019 and 2020 and the impact of the people. I am citing 6 sources in my essay but there is going to be more.

    2.So far, I have written 7 pages.

    3.My classmates commented that I was not very organized and need to find my thesis. Also trying to limit the same things over and over again. Also fix my grammar. Finding my reason to support my idea.

    4.After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are to find my reason. Then supporting it and fixing my organizing my essay.

    5.I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay before the due date before 12 Am by midnight.

  13. I am writing about globalization and covid 19
    I have written about 5 pages so far
    My classmates told me to focus on my references and spelling errors
    I would tend to fix all the spelling errors along with also rephrasing some parts of the essay in a more concise manner.
    I plan to submit my draft prior to the deadline.

  14. 1. I am writing about the argument beyond the efficiency of the Covid 19 vaccine. I am citing 4 sources in my essay.
    So far, I have written 3 pages.
    My classmates commented on the peer review form.
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are 1.2….
    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for 2 hours on Wednesday 1st.

  15. 1) I am writing about the future of office after COVID. I am citing 3 sources in my essay.
    2) So far, I have written two pages.
    3) My classmates commented that I should redo my intro and a few more paragraphs.
    4) I am planning on rewrite my info
    5) I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay before the due date before 12 am by midnight.

  16. I am writing about the future of the workplace due to covid 19. I am citing 3 sources in my essay.
    So far, I have written 4 full pages.
    My classmates commented on my essay and how I was missing my reference page, and cover page at the time.
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are 1 add a reference page & 2 add on to my essay because I do not have 1,600 words at the time.
    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for the entire day on december 2nd.

  17. I am writing about if white-collar jobs switch to hybrid or stick to in-person. I am citing 7# sources in my essay.
    So far, I have written 4pages.
    My classmates commented on finishing up my essay
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are finishing my essay.
    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for 3 hours today.

  18. 1) I’m writing about how it impacts people’s mental health during covid-19 and Asian Americans hate it. I haven’t given any information from cites or sources.
    2) So far, I have at least one page of essay and I’m gonna write more later.
    3) My professor has reviewed my essay and commented on it. Like I need to add more on about the covid and how they are starting to hate Asian Americans.
    4) I’m planning to write more about it
    5) I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for (time duration) on (date).

  19. 1. I am writing about the housing increase and covid. I am citing sources in my essay from google.
    2. So far, I have written 4 pages.
    3. My classmates commented on my peer review form.
    3. After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to add my counterclaim and evidence from sources.
    5. I plan to submit my draft prior to the deadline.

  20. I am writing about the future of workplace environment post covid I am citing 5 sources in my essay.
    So far, I have written 3 pages.
    My classmates commented on an almost complete draft
    After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are 1. Fixing my grammar 2. ensuring that my essay is concise.
    I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for at least 5 hours ) (tonight).

  21. 1) I am writing about how women suffered during the pandemic compared to men. I am citing #6 (extra two) sources in my essay.
    2) So far, I have written 2 pages.
    3) My classmates commented on my grammar and that I should fix it up a bit. I will be using grammarly for this.
    4) After reviewing the comments I have received, the next steps I am planning to do are 1: try to provide more clarification to my writing/claims. 2; Add a bit more evidence to my body paragraphs.
    5) I understand that the final draft is due on Blackboard on December 5 by midnight. The final draft is 2,100 words / ~ 7 double-spaced pages, which includes a Writer’s Cover Letter. In order to successfully submit the essay on time, I plan to work on the essay for every 40 minutes up until the day before the due date.

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