- While there are many different aggressors that contribute to the turmoil in Israel/Palestine, Israel needs to end its human rights violations in order to create long lasting security in the region for all.
- Safety should be the largest concern for all, and from my personal experience not Israel nor Palestine want safety as much as they want revenge and retribution.
Thesis Statements
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Max,
Your first is your most specific and effective, I think, and the only suggestions I have is that you 1)
try to focus in on a specific kind of human rights violation that is particularly insidious (or widespread). This will just help to narrow your focus.
Also, 2)
decide who, exactly in the government is responsible, at least the most responsible (individual or group) for this kind of specific violation, and this will also help to narrow your focus.
Also, just so you are aware, you will need more secondary sources for this, on top of the Russell.