Hey guys due to troubles in Vocat and not being able to upload our project, I have provided you guys with an alternative to watch it in Vimeo. The link is provided below !
https://vimeo.com/163055180
Thank You so much !
Our Demographics is: College freshman students between the ages of 17-20 who enter college and practice bad health habits such as smoking, drinking and eating junk and pulling all nighters.
PS: this is merely a snippet not the actual deal !
Please leave a comments!
Great snippet! Very engaging audios which keeps watchers attention. The video was interesting because I wanted to keep following to see what would happen next. I am interested in watching the full video to find out the full story. Great job in telling a story and keeping an audience in suspense
It was easy to understand the message of this video. The one part I found weird about this video was the music. It was hard for me to tell what the person was saying. I do not know whether or not the words spoken in the video is supposed to be an important part of the message. It is easy for me to relate to this message because I also eat a lot of junk food because of college.
Yancey Ko
Even though it’s only a snipet of the actual presention, it really reaches out to me because I have noticed myself developing many of these bad health habits ever since I enetered college. I also like that you mixed the black and white color filter in the video with the calm yet intense background music. It seems to give more impact to the overall effect.
I like your topic, and it’s of course perfect for your demographic. College freshman are supposed to gain that unfortunate 20 pounds (although your star certainly hasn’t!). I, too, was a bit confused about the choice of music. You might want to rethink that. The images are good ones, but maybe you’d want to emphasize the negative a bit more? Just a thought. Looking forward to your presentation!
I liked the video, everything and everyone was looking great, good angles of the city streets and of the different people without making the shots to muddy. I think the concept of being an unhealthy college student is one that resonates with a lot of Americans, including myself, and I am definitely excited to see what will happen in the rest of the video
The idea of the black and white video is a great idea and also the video was great. It included a lot restaurants and definitely brings out the message of bad health habit when I saw the zoom in of the menus or when Kat was eating the burger. I would have to agree that the music in the background was confusing. From the beginning of the video when the voice came out, I was confused on the target of the video. Also I found the voice to be distracting from the message of the video.