In my presentation, I believe my group was organized and delivered a unified presentation. We would have a good chronological order explaining our individual topics while providing good transitions from each one. The unification is from the order and the transitions between the topics. I believe I could have changed mine a little by expanding my topic a little more. I could have explained more history within the times of the segregation unit. The only improvement in cohesiveness that my group could had changed was adding more stronger transitions. I used the visual aids effectively in each of my slides explaining the change. The most effective moment would be when I mentioned the beginning before the image while leading up to the visual aid. The moment that I believe that I could have improved was when I involved class involvement in my visual aid. During my speech, my physical and vocal delivery was different compared to my previous presentations. I was swaying more than usual, but I believe my eye contact was applicable. My vocal delivery could had improved in the tone and loudness through the room. I would put more confidence in my words while keeping a strong physical stance. Now, other presentations in class kept me entertained by their way of speaking. For instance, they would have some humor plus distinctive facts that relate to modern day history. Well, these facts personally keep me entertained since I could relate the understanding in humor. Overall, the qualities had to be the verbal delivery in tone while having the best physical posture.

Will Ng