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Final Project: Analytical Research Paper + Creative Re-Mix

 

Timeline:
 Monday, April 5th – Overview of Assignment and Brainstorming
Wednesday, April 7th – Share three possible ideas for your research paper topic on the blog before our Zoom session.
 Monday, April 12th – Review of Proposals (This includes possible ideas for the Creative Re-Mix)
 Wednesday, April 21st – Drafts Due
Monday, April 26th – Conferences
Wednesday, April 28th – Review of Proposal for Creative Re-Mix
 Sunday, May 2nd – Research Paper Due  
Wednesday, May 12th – Presentation of Creative Re-Mix Projects
Monday, May 17thPresentation of Creative Re-Mix Project

 

Analytical Research Paper

 

6-8 pages, 12pt type, double-spaced, with one-inch margins
 
This is an analytical research paper.  This means that you will not simply be collecting information about your topic; you will also be interpreting your research findings and drawing conclusions about your topic.
 
Topics:  Your first task is to come up with a topic for your research paper.  Your topic must be connected in some way to our semester’s broad theme of FOOD.  On Wednesday, April 7th, be prepared to share three possible topics during our Zoom session.  As you select your topic, keep the following questions in mind:
–Is this an interesting topic?  It’s particularly important that the topic genuinely interest you!
–Can I find adequate sources to research this topic?
— Is this a topic that will yield analysis, rather than simply the reporting of information?
–Is this topic either too broad or too narrow for a paper of this length?
Research Proposal:  Before our class meeting on Monday, April 12th,  you will submit your Research Proposal in writing by uploading it to our Google Doc Folder, either in the form of a one-paragraph articulation of the topic, a traditional outline, or some combination of those two formats.   You should be able to express your topic in terms of a single question that will guide your research.  Then think about the writing of the paper as an effort to answer your research question.   
Sources: In writing this paper, you must employ a minimum of four sources.   You will cite your sources in accordance with the MLA guidelines (8th Edition).  We will be reviewing the guidelines together in class, and you will receive more detailed instructions about using and citing sources.  Think broadly about what constitutes a “source.”  This could include audio, video, blog posts, personal interviews, and other non-traditional source formats.  The sources you end up using in your research paper will be listed in a Works Cited page at the end of the paper, using MLA formatting guidelines.  At least one of your sources must be a source you access via  the Newman Library’s databases.  (Our goal here is to move away from Google as your primary research strategy!)
  

Creative Re-Mix

At the same time that you are researching your topic and writing your analytical research paper, you should also be thinking about how you want to present your topic in your “creative re-mix”. The re-mix project gives you an opportunity to explore your subject in a more creative, subjective, or personal way.  It’s up to you to decide what form your re-mix should take and how it should relate to your research paper.  Your Research Paper and Creative Re-Mix should be related, but not identical.  This is NOT about creating a powerpoint presentation that summarizes your research; it’s about producing a creative project that complements your research.

 Some possible formats you might consider for the creative re-mix are:

Comic strip/cartoon

Blog

Video

Photo essay

Creative writing (short story, poetry, song)

Visual art

Interview

Interactive map

Timeline

Social Media Based Project

Podcast

Oral History

Community Service Project

 

You will be presenting your Creative Re-Mix to the class during our last two sessions on Wed., May 12th and Mon., May 17th. We will pick numbers from a hat (or the virtual equivalent)  to determine the order of the presentations.

 

 

 

Essay #2 – Textual Analysis

Essay Length:  3-5 pages

Drafts Due:  Before class on Wednesday, March 17th.  Place your draft in our shared ENG2150 Google Doc folder.  Be sure you have included your name plus “Textual Analysis Draft” in the name of the file.

Essays Due: Friday, March 26th (placed in your private Google Doc folder)

For this essay, you will be taking a deep dive into one of the texts we’ve read so far this semester.  To some extent, the approach you take will be determined by the text you choose, but in all cases, your job is to use this essay writing process to understand some aspect of your chosen text more deeply and fully and to communicate that understanding clearly to your reader.

Possible Texts:

Toni Morrison, “The Day and its Splendid Parts”

Gabrielle Hamilton, “Killing Dinner”

Chang-Rae Lee, “Coming Home Again”

Sam Anderson, “I Recommend Eating Chips”

David Foster Wallace, “Consider the Lobster”

Michael Pollan, “Power Steer”

 

Process:

Step One – Select your text.  Which of these texts grabbed your attention most fully or stuck with you most persistently after reading it?  Which text do you still not fully understand? Which text could you happily spend more time with?  Use these questions to determine the text you will write about!

Step Two – Reread and Annotate.  Use this re-reading as an opportunity to identify those elements of the texts that seem to you to be the most import.   That might mean zeroing in on the argument that the author seems to be making (for Foster Wallace and Pollan),  it might mean marking passages that illuminate deeper issues or relationships (in the first-person narrations).  You will be coming back to your annotations as you craft your analysis, so be sure to highlight any text that you may want to quote in your essay!  Also use these marginal notes to start naming what you are noticing in the text, describing it in your own words, and jotting down your own questions, comments, and reactions to what you are reading.

Step Three – Determine your Focus. Now that you have re-read the text, you are ready to decide on the question your paper will be focusing on.  (I am a believer in focusing on a question at this stage, rather than a thesis.)  Your question may address an author’s rhetorical strategies (through a question like “What rhetorical techniques does David Foster Wallace use to get us to think more deeply about cooking and eating lobster?”); it may delve deeply into the content of a text (through a question like, “What does Chang-Rae Lee’s essay reveal about the complicated relationship between mother and son?”); or it may focus on argumentation (as in “What does Pollan reveal about the health implications of eating factory-farmed beef?”) Make sure your question is not a yes/no question.  It should be open-ended and one that you can answer through close engagement with the text.

Step Four – Make a Plan.  Do not begin writing your essay without some kind of plan.  Your plan may look like a traditional outline.  It might be a list of your body paragraphs, spelling out the topic or main idea of each one.  It might be an idea map that places your question at the center and imagines all your ideas as growing out of that central question.  You should be referring back to your annotations here.  Use the passages you’ve marked and the ideas you’ve generated in the margins as the skeleton for the essay.  This way, your ideas will grow directly out of the text.  This tends to be a better strategy than coming up with ideas and then looking for “evidence” in the text to back them up!  If you are stuck, try doing some freewriting in response to your question to unlock your creativity and get a better sense of what it is that you really think.

Step Five – Write a Draft.  Use your plan to write your draft.  Sometimes it’s easier to start with the body paragraphs, then go back and write your conclusion once you have figured out what it is you have to say.  As you write, remember that your task here involves close reading and analysis.  This means that every body paragraph will probably include one or more quotations from the text.  Each time you include a quotation, be sure that you provide some lead-in or introduction to the quotation and then offer some analysis of the quotation itself,  explaining just what it is that you want the reader to notice about the quotation and connecting the quotation to the idea that you are exploring in that paragraph.

Step Six – Revision.  During this stage of the process, you will be integrating the feedback you have gotten from your peers and your professor and reworking your essay in order to express your ideas more clearly and effectively.  Don’t be afraid to let go of any material in the paper that is taking the reader away from your focus, and make sure that your revised paper incorporates and highlights any new ideas that you developed during the process of writing your first draft.  You will probably want to rewrite your introduction completely, so that it spells out more clearly exactly where this essay is headed.

Step Seven – Proofreading and Submission.  Just as you did for the Personal Narrative, you will be submitting your finished essay to me by placing it in the Google Docs folder that you created for this purpose.  Be sure to give the file a name that includes your name, ENG2150, and Textual Analysis.  Once you have placed the document in the folder, consider the paper submitted.  Do NOT go back into the file and make any changes, even AFTER I have read and commented on the essay.  If you decide that you want to rewrite the paper after I have “returned” it to you, make a copy of the file, identify it as a REWRITE, and use that new file to work on your revisions.

 

Assignments – Week #4

Our focus this week is on your Personal Narratives.  By the time you read this, you should have received some feedback from the members of your writing group via the peer review process and should be turning your attention to the REVISION process.  Please keep in mind that REVISION  is not the same thing as EDITING or PROOFREADING.

REVISION is the process of rethinking and reshaping both the structure and the content of your essay.  As you gain greater clarity about what it is that you really want to say, you will often find that you need to eliminate large chunks of your original draft, create new material to respond to important questions that have arisen, and reorganize the essay in order to make it more effective.  Very often, when we begin drafting an essay, we are focussed on meeting the length requirement and on simply unlocking our creative energy by getting our writing going; this usually means focussing less on content, style, and structure and more on simply getting our thoughts down on the page.  When we revise, we take a step back from our draft, review the goals and purpose of this writing project, and use this as an opportunity to refocus and refine our plan.  In short, revision (which literally means “seeing anew” focuses on the big picture of our essay’s ideas and execution.

EDITING is the process of making our writing as effective as possible.  It is during the editing process that we turn our attention to word choice, sentence structure, tone, and other elements that might fall under the loose category of “style.”  Here too we might find ourselves moving things around in our essay in order to make our paragraphs more effective.   A great strategy to employ during this stage of the process is reading aloud.  When we read our work aloud, we can hear awkwardness, errors, and stylistic issues that our eyes simply don’t catch.   Through the editing process, your writing should get brighter, sharper, and clearer.

PROOFREADING is the last step that you take before submitting work to your professor, before pressing send on an email, or printing an important document.  During the proofreading process, we look for typos, spelling errors, spacing problems and anything else that might detract from the polished quality of our finished work or distract our reader.  It is often really useful to swap papers with an eagle-eyed friend for the proofreading process.  Sometimes we have a hard time spotting our own errors.  Do NOT rely on spell-check to find all your errors for you.

On Monday, February 22nd, you will be meeting with me in your Writing Groups according to the schedule listed below.  Additionally, you should be connecting with your Writing Groups without me in order to go over the feedback from the Peer Review, get additional advice, and formulate your next steps.  Your group should decide how it would like to meet.  (Some options are Slack, group chat, facetime, or Zoom.  I am happy to schedule and host zoom meetings for you.)

11:30 – 12:00  Group 1: Geselle, Kaylen, Abdu

12:00 – 12:30  Group 2: Samantha, Gianni, Nicole

12:30 – 1:00  Group 3: Melanie, Mokhitobon, Sydney

1:00 – 1:30  Group 4: Lorraine, Danna, Brian

1:30 – 2:00 Group 5: Destiny, Lelani, Mindy

To prepare for your conference, please do the following:

  • Read your peer review feedback carefully and connect with your partners if you need further clarification.
  • Begin your revision process (as described above) and be prepared to discuss it on Monday.
  • Add an update to the #essays channel in our Slack workspace in which you share one piece of particularly helpful feedback that you received about your draft and describe how you will be addressing it through your revision.  You can also use this update as an opportunity to share whatever aspects of the process you are having difficulty with.  Keep an eye on this channel, and respond to your classmates’ updates where you think you can be helpful or encouraging. (If you still haven’t joined our class’s Slack workspace, go to the “Technology” tab at the top of the blog.  You can find a link for Slack in the information posted there.)

For Wednesday, February 24th:  Please read Sam Anderson’s essay “I Recommend Eating Chips” which you can find on the blog under the “Texts” tab.  Before class, please post to the blog:

–One word you had to look up from Anderson’s essay, together with its definition.

–A line that made you LOL or at least smile.

–If you were assigned an essay like this – a love letter to a particular food or eating experience, what would it be? Why?

For Thursday, February 25th:. Your essays are due by midnight.  As I explained in the essay assignment, you will create a folder with your name plus English 2150 in its title and share the folder with me.  Add your finished version of the essay to the folder.

Project #1:  Personal Narrative

Length: 3-4 pages, double-spaced

Drafts Due: Tuesday, February 16th

Essays Due: Thursday, February 25th

For this first essay of the semester, you will be sharing a story that explores some aspect of your life or identity through the lens of food.  You may want to recount a very specific incident, as Gabrielle Hamilton does in “Killing Dinner”; you may want to use food as the thread in exploring a broader, more expansive narrative, as Chang-Rae Lee does in “Coming Home Again”; or perhaps you want to connect your food story to issues of family or cultural history, as Toni Morrison does in “The Day and Its Splendid Parts.”

As you develop your ideas, think about what will make this essay engaging and meaningful for you and for your reader.  A successful essay will not just describe an experience vividly; it will connect the food experience being shared to more complex issues of identity, relationships, or personal history.  To use a food metaphor, you want your essay to be “meaty” – not superficial.  How can the reader understand you more deeply after reading your essay?  How can you use food as a gateway to thinking about some of the more complicated aspects of your personal story?  

*You are welcome to use the food memory you shared on the blog as a jumping off point for thinking about this essay, but keep in mind that you would need to connect that memory to some of the larger issues referred to above.

 

Submission Instructions:

Drafts:  You will turn in your draft as a Google Doc by placing it in our shared folder, called ENG 2150 SP21.  Here is the link to access the folder.  Please give your file the title:  “Your Name Personal Narrative Draft” before placing it in the folder.

 

Finished Essays:  Your finished essay will also be submitted as a Google Doc, but it will be shared only with me.  In order to do this and to keep all your formal essays together, please create a folder called: “Your Name English 2150 SP21,” share the folder with me ([email protected]), and place your finished paper inside.