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Assignment 12
Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
And watched the smoke that rises from the pipes
Of lonely men in shirt-sleeves, leaning out of windows? … (Lines 70-73)
- Alred Prufrock had just left a room full of women pondering to himself whether he should’ve approached them or not. In the lines I’ve chosen, Prufrock is walking down a street during the evening and sees lonely men smoking from their windows. I chose these specific lines because it was one of the few sections where I fully understood what was literally happening. But also I thought these lines were exceptionally ordinary. This is definitely a Literary Modernism trait, when there isn’t a why to it but rather as the professor said “A stream of consciousness”. These lines provided further evidence of isolation in the community because he didn’t just describe the men as men but as lonely men. With the added fact that the women were in one room and men were by themselves, I think that these lines could be how Prufrock felt about himself. He felt isolated since he didn’t approach the women in that room, and can also see himself as one of those lonely men. Although my passage was quite straightforward, I still want to know if there were specific reasons for his word choice. Why did he use dusk? Was there perhaps a connection between Prufrock’s state of mind and the specific time?
Week 12
“I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each. I do not think that they will sing to me.” (Line 124, 125)
Prufrock portrays himself as a middle-aged man by telling us that he has bald spots in his hair. Although he is not young, he still knows how to carry himself elegantly. It appears that he is attracted to a beautiful woman, but his insecurities that have gotten the better of him are holding him back from expressing his feelings to her. I feel like the ‘Mermaids’ are being used to depict a fantasy or imaginary world he has in which he can appreciate them from afar, but he fears that even if he gathers to get close to them, they will see him how he sees himself. The ‘Mermaids’ are like that woman, he fears that if he tells her how he feels about her, she will reject him, so he admires her from a distance.
https://youtu.be/gnLjdtreu1k (4:18-4:40)
Assignment #12
Lines 40-46
With a bald spot in the middle of my hair —
(They will say: “How his hair is growing thin!”)
My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,
My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin —
(They will say: “But how his arms and legs are thin!”)
Do I dare
Disturb the universe?
In these lines, Prufrock talks about his insecurities. He feels like people care about his hair or how he dresses up. He talks about how he has everything in life, money and wealth yet he feels like people talk about his insecurities behind his back when no one does except for him. In this passage, he explains the reasons why he doesn’t approach the woman she likes. The lines where he says do I dare disturb the universe he feels like if goes out of his comfort zone to approach her, he will get an anxiety attack and won’t be able to do so or far worse, she will reject him because he is a middle-age bald, as soon as he thinks about approaching her, his insecurities come on his mind. He is seen as his own critique in this poem.
Assignments – Week #13
- Kafka, The Metamorphosis:. This week’s reading is one of my favorites!!! You can find “The Metamorphosis” in Vol. F of your anthology. Please join our Zoom on Wednesday prepared to share your thoughts about what this mysterious text is all about.
- Choose two of the questions listed below to respond to, and share your responses in a separate blog post. For each response, please be sure to provide concrete textual evidence to support and illustrate your ideas. Responses should be shared by Wednesday, May 5th.
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- How is Gregor’s family transformed in the wake of his metamorphosis?
- Do you think that Gregor is more powerful BEFORE or AFTER his metamorphosis? Explain your response.
- Discuss the theme of food and eating. What role does it play in “The Metamorphosis”?
- At the end of the second section of the story, Gregor’s father pelts him with apples. What do you think this episode is about?
- Gregor emerges from his room one last time when he hears his sister playing her violin for the lodgers. What is the significance of this scene? What meaning does music hold for Gregor here?
- Ultimately, what do you think Gregor’s metamorphosis means? What does it mean to be transformed into a giant bug?
- Explain your understanding of Gregor’s death. How/why does he ultimately die?
- Look at the final paragraph of the story. How does it shape or alter our understanding of the text?
3. Essay #2 – In a separate post, I have shared your final essay assignment. Please read the post carefully, and use the “Comments” feature on that post to share an observation, question, or concern about this assignment. We will have a chance to discuss the assignment during our class on Wednesday. Note that the first step in this assignment is coming up with your own essay topic, which must fall loosely within the broad parameters of individual vs. society I outlined in the prompt. Email me your proposed topic in the form of a question no later than Friday, May 7th.
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Essay #2
- Question Due: no later than Friday, May 7th, submitted via email to [email protected].
- Essays Due: Wednesday, May 19th, shared with [email protected] as a Google Doc by midnight.
- 5-6 pages typed, double-spaced, with one-inch margins
Essay Prompt: Drawing on any two readings we’ve read over the semester, consider the complicated relationship between the individual and society as it’s explored in the works we’ve read. What issues emerge when society’s demands are not in line with the desires of the individual? How do the authors we’ve studied see that struggle?
This is a broad subject, so you will need to narrow your scope in order to construct a tightly focused analytical essay.
Step One: Submit your topic to me in the form of a question. Your written topic (to be submitted by Friday, May 7th) should show how you’ve adapted the broad issue of the individual and society to suit the particular texts you’re discussing. For example, you might choose to think about the issue in terms of gender and focus your attention on the conflict between societal demands and individual desires as they relate to women in two of the texts you’ve read. (This is just one example; we could come up with many more!) Formulate your topic in the form of a question you are asking about the two texts you’ve chosen.
One strategy you may find useful for coming up with your topic is as follows:
–What two texts do you want to write about?
–What area of overlap do you see between the two texts?
–What are you asking about the two texts?
–Once you’ve identified the question you’re asking about your two texts, be sure that your question is not a “yes or no” or “either/or” question and that the question you are asking will require analysis, rather than a simple description of what happens in the texts.
You may choose your texts from anywhere in the syllabus up to and including “The Metamorphosis.” However you may not write about the text you wrote about in your first paper of the semester. Like your first essay, this paper is a close textual analysis, based on your own thinking about the texts we’ve studied. DO NOT CONSULT ANY SECONDARY SOURCES IN THE PROCESS OF WRITING THIS PAPER!!!
Once you have submitted your question, you will receive a response to your email. If the response asks you to further refine or revise your question, you will need to send me a follow-up email with the changes I’ve suggested. Once your topic is “good to go,” the email response from me will conclude, “Good luck with the essay!” This means you are ready to start collecting quotations, putting together an outline, and drafting your essay!
Week 12 Assignment # 2
The lines that I am analyzing is “For I have known them all already, known them all: Have known the evenings, mornings, afternoons, I have measured out my life with coffee spoons;”. The line numbers are 49 through 51. The literal meaning of this passage is how is he all alone and he has to figure out how to spend his time all alone. He has to deal with his emotions and his feelings. His feelings are dealing with isolation and lack of taking his own decision. I choose this passage because the stanzas stand out and they show his feelings of isolation. The words I had to look up is inadequacy. Inadequacy means the state or quality of being inadequate; lack of the quantity or quality required.
assignment #12
In this poem the most part I familiar is this part “Let us go then, you and I,When the evening is spread out against the sky Like a patient etherized upon a table;Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets,”” for my own understanding is that the author really desire about love, he wants his lover is in his spirit make him does not feel so lonely, I want to explain this part because a lot people think about my lover what is going to be like, however I think the most important thing about lovers is the lover can help you in the spirit, can stimulate you. The author using metaphor for the second and third phrase. The word that I do not understand I highlight in the hypothes.is. So I think author use metaphor is trying to show the reader feel more realistic the lover in his mind.
Connections between ‘Punishment’ and ‘The Death of Ivan Ilyich’
After reading ‘Punishment,’ I noticed one of the central themes within the text, as well as one of the greatest issues the characters faced was the death of Radha. Additionally, how the characters responded to her murder were equally as significant to the story, because this is what led Chandara to confess to a murder she never committed. An intestresting aspect in the story ‘The Death of Ivan Ilyich’ has a similar textual context, in that although Ilyich’s death is one of the main focal points, the reactions of his peers shortly before and after his death are also notable. Firstly, in Punishment, one of choices Chidam makes after an additional witness to the murder appears, Ramlochan, is to lie about what happened, so as to try to protect his brother from being charged for the murder he committed by pinning the blame on Chandara. As the story writes, “But why is Dukhi crying so?’ asked Ramlochan, stepping towards the verandah. Seeing no way out now, Chidam blurted out, “In their quarrel, Chotobau struck at Barobau’s head with a farm-knife.” (p. 894) According to the story, Chidam’s rash thinking placed a higher value over his brother than his wife, which caused him to put the blame on her. From this, we can see that Chidam was quick to make decisions, but did not think them through before proceeding. At first glance, this is understandable, in that Chidam is trying to protect his only brother from incrimination, but this false accusation spirals into Chandara being executed for Dukhiram’s crime. On the other hand, when looking at The Death of Ivan Ilyich, the character’s reactions to the death are not so consequential, but still very notable. When being faced with Ilyich’s death, his colleagues responded with thinking, “Well, he’s dead but I’m alive!” (p. 741) They anticipated the “very tiresome demands of propriety by attending the funeral service and paying a visit of condolence to the widow.” (p. 741) From this, we can see that Ilyich’s peers did not care that much about his death, and were very pleased to remember that they still had their own lives to live and enjoy, although their peer had lost his life. In this light, although in both stories the characters have to deal with a death, their reactions to the death adds even more details and textual evidence to their character traits, and who they are as a person, and what their values are.
Welcome to the 20th Century and an Introduction to Literary Modernism
As promised, I have recorded a short lecture about Literary Modernism, our next unit. Hopefully, this will give you a fuller picture of what is going on in intellectual history in the early 20th century and how that might affect the kind of artistic work being created.
Please watch the video using this LINK as well as the Passcode: ?Ste%H1r
Once you have watched the video, please make a comment on this post, sharing one observation that made an impression on you from the lecture or one thought that you have in response to it. Please share your comments by Wednesday, April 28th.
Assignments – Week #12
1.Read T.S. Eliot’s long poem, “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock.” As I mentioned last week, I would like us to give Hypothes.is another try. Please access the poem HERE and as you read, use Hypothes.is to make notes, ask questions, record the meanings of any unfamiliar words, and add anything other thoughts or connections that occur to you as you are reading. In order to annotate the text and share your annotations with our class, you need to first sign in to Hypothes.is, then select ENG2850 from the pull-down menu (The alternative is “Public”). You may also enjoy hearing Eliot read his poem aloud, which you can do HERE. Please make 4-6 annotations before we discuss the poem on Wednesday 4/28 during our Zoom call.
2.Choose a moment in the poem that seems to you to be crying out for more extensive explication and analysis. This could be a passage that you find really challenging, or it could be a passage that you feel you already have some insight into. I would recommend choosing a passage of 2-4 lines. Offer a detailed analysis of your passage, including the following:
-copy the lines you are analyzing, and be sure to identify their line numbers.
-explain the literal meaning of the passage.
-what made you choose this passage?
-what words, terms, or names did you need to look up? What do they mean?
-what symbolism, imagery, or other poetic devices is Eliot employing in these lines?
-how do these lines connect to the central concerns of the poem as a whole?
-what do you still not understand about your passage?
-what resources (if any) did you consult in order to complete this assignment? My preference would be that you rely on. your own native intelligence and curiosity to complete this assignment, but if you do consult any outside sources, they must be acknowledged appropriately. (Remember that any time you offer an idea that you found in another source, whether you quote from that source or not, you must include a parenthetical citation identifying your source. Failure to do so is plagiarism, a serious academic offense. Consult me if you have questions about this!)
Please post this assignment (as a free-standing blog post) by Friday, April 30th.
3.Introduction to Literary Modernism – Please stay tuned for a brief video I recorded introducing the next major aesthetic movement we will be exploring (Literary Modernism) and saying a few words about the beginning of the 20th Century. My original lecture did not record properly, so I will be re-recording and posting this, hopefully by Friday evening, April 23rd.
4. Slight Schedule Change: If you have been following along on our syllabus, you will note that I have deviated slightly from the reading schedule listed on the syllabus. This coming week, we are only reading T.S. Eliot. The following week (5/3 and 5/5), we will be reading and discussing Kafka, “The Metamorphosis.” It is a longer text, so you might want to begin reading it now, while our reading load is modest. After Kafka, we will be reading Borowski’s “This Way for the Gas, Ladies and Gentlemen” ( May 10th), Salih’s “The Doum Tree of Wad Hamid” (May 12th), and Allende’s “And of Clay are We Created” (May 17th)
5. Any Questions? Please feel free to reach out to me via email or Slack if you have questions about any of this. We are approaching the end of the semester, and I don’t want you to fall behind or lose your momentum as life gets increasingly busy. You can sign up for office hours HERE.